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Array ( [sid] => 67053 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Pain [time] => 2004-10-11 22:58:40 [hometext] => Please comment!!!! they mean alot to me....thanx [bodytext] => I sit here watching myself slowly die
Faster and faster with each tear that I cry
I don’t know why I started causing myself pain
Slicing away hoping to hit a vein

For some reason I do not fear death
I just can’t wait to take my last breath
Taking an end for a new beginning
Inside my head these thoughts are spinning

All of the cuts and scars that I cause
Is my way of dealing with all of my flaws
Taking my pain from the inside out
Is something I fear I cannot live without

Scars upon scars I make appear
One for each and every tear
I love to see them everyday
I never want them to go away

A constant reminder that this world is hell
A reminder of each and every time I fell
So here I am slowly watching myself die
And all that I can do is silently cry
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Pain

Contributed by CrimsonTears on Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 10:58:40 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I sit here watching myself slowly die
Faster and faster with each tear that I cry
I don’t know why I started causing myself pain
Slicing away hoping to hit a vein

For some reason I do not fear death
I just can’t wait to take my last breath
Taking an end for a new beginning
Inside my head these thoughts are spinning

All of the cuts and scars that I cause
Is my way of dealing with all of my flaws
Taking my pain from the inside out
Is something I fear I cannot live without

Scars upon scars I make appear
One for each and every tear
I love to see them everyday
I never want them to go away

A constant reminder that this world is hell
A reminder of each and every time I fell
So here I am slowly watching myself die
And all that I can do is silently cry

Copyright Â© CrimsonTears ... [ 2004-10-11 22:58:40]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by Doriens_Picture on Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 11:24:28 PM AEST
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This is deep and as you can tell from what i write i know it all too well to want to take you life

Re: Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by ll on Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 12:01:17 AM AEST
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i like it.i feel almost the same way.i don't really care of dying but i will still live for those aruond me.

Re: Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 05:32:09 AM AEST
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yeah this is deep and well expressed,

pixie xx

Re: Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by a_bear on Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 06:41:54 AM AEST
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I would like to read something happy..this isn't it. No one is happy any more..and I guess I better stop looking outside and look inside...great poem..but next time if you want me to read..lie and say it's a happy post. lol My life sucks too and I need some sunshine once in awhile...sorry yours is painful too...

Re: Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 09:44:26 AM AEST
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Feel the pain you are going through have been there many a time in my life, you have written this poem well showing such immense strength and a driven by heartfelt feelings, beautifully written as always from such a talented mind as yours is.
Take care always

Karl

Re: Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 11:05:39 AM AEST
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Very intense and well done write!
I hope that you survive long enough to one day find something worth living for.
Perhaps your talent?

Re: Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 03:49:03 PM AEST
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mmmmmm a reminder of each and everytime i fell......profound intense statement.......i like that

Re: Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by Ronald on Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 12:57:17 AM AEST
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((((HUGS)))) Don't fret... don't be sad... The world may be very cruel but you've got to learn how to stand up again. (((((HUGS))))) You can be winner in this life... Choose that path and conquer every obstacle. You should listen to the song 'I Believe' by Fantasia Barrino. It's will inspire you to live. Anyway, it's a great poem.

Re: Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by Hoots on Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 04:48:48 PM AEST
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Beautifully written. I can totally relate. Aaaaahhhh...I just got mad goosebumps. CRAZY. It's like something that would come out of MY head....great minds think alike huh? Well...I really enjoyed reading your poem...and I hope you keep writing poems like this. You have talent...keep it up.
Krystle

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