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[aid] => mick
[title] => I wish I could see your smile.
[time] => 2004-10-12 08:59:00
[hometext] => Its been 3 yrs. Oct. 25th since my mom passed.
[bodytext] => Mom, I wish I could see your smile,
If only for a short while,
Its not the same looking at a photo of you,
I need to see those eyes of blue,
I think how much things have changed,
how much the furnitures been rearranged,
the kids are older and one more has been born,
our hearts are broken not just torn,
three years gone with out your face,
memmories of you we cant erase,
I miss you so, we all really do,
I just wish I could talk to you,
Thats something I surely miss,
the kids need your tender kiss,
I still cry I hope thats ok,
The pain will never go away,
I'm sorry if I still seem sad,
but I see the pain inside dad,
hes lonely mom with out you here,
I dont have to see his tears,
I see it on his sad face,
when he goes to a familar place,
places, things,dates that remind him of you,
Is hard for him to just get through,
We need to see your smile,
Mom, if only for awhile,
I know your happy in Heavens gate,
Not having you near is what I hate.
For my mom who passed on Oct. 25th 2001
We all miss you!
[comments] => 12
[counter] => 278
[topic] => 39
[informant] => lowman613
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[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 20
[ratings] => 4
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => Grief
)
I wish I could see your smile.
Contributed by
lowman613
on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 08:59:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Mom, I wish I could see your smile,
If only for a short while,
Its not the same looking at a photo of you,
I need to see those eyes of blue,
I think how much things have changed,
how much the furnitures been rearranged,
the kids are older and one more has been born,
our hearts are broken not just torn,
three years gone with out your face,
memmories of you we cant erase,
I miss you so, we all really do,
I just wish I could talk to you,
Thats something I surely miss,
the kids need your tender kiss,
I still cry I hope thats ok,
The pain will never go away,
I'm sorry if I still seem sad,
but I see the pain inside dad,
hes lonely mom with out you here,
I dont have to see his tears,
I see it on his sad face,
when he goes to a familar place,
places, things,dates that remind him of you,
Is hard for him to just get through,
We need to see your smile,
Mom, if only for awhile,
I know your happy in Heavens gate,
Not having you near is what I hate.
For my mom who passed on Oct. 25th 2001
We all miss you!
Copyright ©
lowman613
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2004-10-12 08:59:00]
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Re: I wish I could see your smile.
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 09:02:10 AM AEST
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aww I am so sorry for your loss, must have been so painful for you to write about this. This poem is really sad and so very moving *hugs*
takecare
pixie xx
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Re: I wish I could see your smile.
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 09:12:17 AM AEST
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| A beautifully written and very moving poem, I am sure she is watching over you, and I can see she will always reside within all your hearts, please take care always. |
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Re: I wish I could see your smile.
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by Avarice_Riot on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 09:12:42 AM AEST
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| This is so sad, the effect of the loss of your mother has had on your lives really bleeds through vividly. |
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Re: I wish I could see your smile.
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by blowfish_jane on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 09:16:45 AM AEST
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I'm sorry for you're loss only a few of us can relate to youre pain. Your poem is sweet and moving.
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Re: I wish I could see your smile.
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by brew on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 09:33:11 AM AEST
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| What a well written and emotional, heart felt write. I do understand, as I lost my mom last yr. She was young, and well just can understand. I miss her all the time and wish I could have time as well. but I know she is there and happy. Things do happen for a reason......Keep smiling, and loving her.she knows! |
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Re: I wish I could see your smile.
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by Ronald on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 10:25:47 AM AEST
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| (((((HUGS))))) Awww... don't feel so sad... I'm sure your mum is living in heaven without any suffering or pain. Stay happy for her pal... She wants to see you happy. I'm sure she still wants the best for you. Take care pal. Hope to see another of your work here. bye. |
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Re: I wish I could see your smile.
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by AliB on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 10:31:26 AM AEST
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What a lovely and moving poem, I'm sure your mum is still very proud of you and is watching over baby Leanne. My thoughts are with you.
Ali xx |
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Re: I wish I could see your smile.
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 11:24:55 AM AEST
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This is a loving and wonderful tribute to your mother.
Kie |
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Re: I wish I could see your smile.
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 09:40:25 PM AEST
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Very sad but beautifully written.
My mom has been gone since 1979 but she comes to me in dreams. My father has been gone for seven years but it still seems jus like yesturday.
Hang tuff friend and enjoy your Dad while he's still with u.
luv, huggs, strength,
emy |
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Re: I wish I could see your smile.
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 11:46:36 PM AEST
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Oh Christina this is so sad, and yet so kind and loving too! It's so hard to go on living without someone you adored! I'm so sorry your Mother is no longer with you except in your heart........I know it's not the same!
But by writing beautiful poems to honor her like this one........she will stay alive from year to year!
What a honorable and beautiful tribute
Warm hugs and love to you and yours,
ConSue
PS. It's all right to be sad, Christina.......but someday you'll meet once again! |
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Re: I wish I could see your smile.
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by irishgirl812 on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 10:31:37 PM AEST
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| beautiful poem and very moving, well written. im sorry for your loss, writing about it helps, im sure, that is how i deal with alot of things. |
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Re: I wish I could see your smile.
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by Spazzo on
Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 04:36:57 PM AEST
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I am sorry for you loss. This is a powerful and touching poem.
Spazzo |
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