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Array ( [sid] => 67097 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => When Your Gone [time] => 2004-10-12 09:51:28 [hometext] => WISHING YOU WERE BACK ALREADY [bodytext] => Its seven am, i look at my phone.
Three hours till ten, then the dial tone.
The ringing sets in, your voice i hear.
Bringing me close , to you i am near.
Just for a minute, one moment or two.
Hearing your voice, you say "i love you"
How happy i feel, i know its true.

My alarm rings, waking me from my sleep.
Dragging me away, from the dream i long to keep.
Opening my eyes to a brand new day.
Trying to find something to keep me sane, every day you are away.
I think of my dream, just that phonecall and your there.
I find it hard, sometimes it seems so unfair.
Then i read your last message, you got in the last word.
A tear falls, thinking of when your voice i last heard.

Theres all these people, drinking and standing around.
Nine hundred of them, yet i only want to hear one sound.
Theres people saying hi, mate how have you been.
Even one or two , in a long time i have not seen.
I shake thier hands, but i do not care.
You, my happiness, are not there.

I know soon you will be back, its only a few days away.
I cannot keep this loneliness at bay.
The days have become nights, and nights into day.
All just melting in to one, minutes feeling like forever.
Longing for that moment, when again we can be together.

The only things keeping me going, that are helping me cope.
Are the moments we have shared together, and this magical thing called hope.
The most important, your words when you said "I love you"
When i hear them, i know them to be true.

With these words i write, i write them only for you.
So when you get back. You know how i feel too.
Cause my pretty lady, I love and miss you....


Remember when you told me that even in a room full of people, how alone you felt.
I have not stopped feeling that way since we last spoke ( EVEN AT THE CLUB)... MUCH MORE






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When Your Gone

Contributed by 13hopes on Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 09:51:28 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



Its seven am, i look at my phone.
Three hours till ten, then the dial tone.
The ringing sets in, your voice i hear.
Bringing me close , to you i am near.
Just for a minute, one moment or two.
Hearing your voice, you say "i love you"
How happy i feel, i know its true.

My alarm rings, waking me from my sleep.
Dragging me away, from the dream i long to keep.
Opening my eyes to a brand new day.
Trying to find something to keep me sane, every day you are away.
I think of my dream, just that phonecall and your there.
I find it hard, sometimes it seems so unfair.
Then i read your last message, you got in the last word.
A tear falls, thinking of when your voice i last heard.

Theres all these people, drinking and standing around.
Nine hundred of them, yet i only want to hear one sound.
Theres people saying hi, mate how have you been.
Even one or two , in a long time i have not seen.
I shake thier hands, but i do not care.
You, my happiness, are not there.

I know soon you will be back, its only a few days away.
I cannot keep this loneliness at bay.
The days have become nights, and nights into day.
All just melting in to one, minutes feeling like forever.
Longing for that moment, when again we can be together.

The only things keeping me going, that are helping me cope.
Are the moments we have shared together, and this magical thing called hope.
The most important, your words when you said "I love you"
When i hear them, i know them to be true.

With these words i write, i write them only for you.
So when you get back. You know how i feel too.
Cause my pretty lady, I love and miss you....


Remember when you told me that even in a room full of people, how alone you felt.
I have not stopped feeling that way since we last spoke ( EVEN AT THE CLUB)... MUCH MORE










Copyright © 13hopes ... [ 2004-10-12 09:51:28]
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Re: When Your Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by candyistoo-sweet on Thursday, 1st June 2006 @ 06:00:30 AM AEST
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"cause my pretty lady, i love and miss you..." my o my she is a lucky girl. to deserve such beautiful words.


Re: When Your Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by deadclown on Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 03:39:26 PM AEST
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glad I took the time to read this. You've made me realise what I need to do. Thanx




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