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Array ( [sid] => 67107 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You and Me [time] => 2004-10-12 11:18:58 [hometext] => [bodytext] => You and Me

Time is a key
I swear it took forever
Why didn't you see
I was telling so hard, like pullin a lever
but why didn't you notice me?

Now we have taken our chance
who would of known, it's you and me
Though the feelings i feel, were like out our first dance

We've unraveled a knot
that we have now tied
i couldn't wait for that touch
for the touch of hand i wanted so much

Only one question, that is so remaining
i know its a big task, then again maybe to early to ask
oh well, I'm revealing the question that lies underneath the mask

What are the feelings feel?
Where in your heart those thoughts are containingWhy, is the question
Fearing, you'll ask
It's the comfort of knowing those feelings
In your heart they keep maintaining

After many years, It's now you and me
But always remember
time WAS the key

Nicole Keith
Summer of 2004 [comments] => 1 [counter] => 166 [topic] => 48 [informant] => luckigurl [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

You and Me

Contributed by luckigurl on Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 11:18:58 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

You and Me

Time is a key
I swear it took forever
Why didn't you see
I was telling so hard, like pullin a lever
but why didn't you notice me?

Now we have taken our chance
who would of known, it's you and me
Though the feelings i feel, were like out our first dance

We've unraveled a knot
that we have now tied
i couldn't wait for that touch
for the touch of hand i wanted so much

Only one question, that is so remaining
i know its a big task, then again maybe to early to ask
oh well, I'm revealing the question that lies underneath the mask

What are the feelings feel?
Where in your heart those thoughts are containingWhy, is the question
Fearing, you'll ask
It's the comfort of knowing those feelings
In your heart they keep maintaining

After many years, It's now you and me
But always remember
time WAS the key

Nicole Keith
Summer of 2004

Copyright © luckigurl ... [ 2004-10-12 11:18:58]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: You and Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Ronald on Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 11:37:24 AM AEST
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This poem is so emotional and I can feel the love running through the whole poem. You're a talented poet. It seems that you're new in YPDC too. Welcome pal!! I feel so priveleged to be the first to give you a comment. Keep those poems coming ok? :-)

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