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Array ( [sid] => 67142 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Blue Moon [time] => 2004-10-12 16:13:48 [hometext] => Another write dedicated to inspirational forces. [bodytext] => She observes,
Adorned in gleaming tresses of cerulean sins,
Shining brilliantly in the diamond showered night…
Beautiful, seductive, alluring,
She stands gracefully, beckoning to all that see her…
Naïve as children, they follow,
Her sweet song enrapturing them in splendor, endless bliss…
Dancing so elegantly,
A waltz of dreams,
Across the raven skies…
So beguiling, so enticing…
My inspiration, my Mother, my eternal Muse…
A sweet kiss is given,
On the crown of my head…
A pallid kiss, in which you must be worthy of giving…
An embrace of ghostly love,
In which I can only find when she is present…
Her world, so enthralling,
Forever to be in this spell…
How I love this love,
This affection between nature and Her child,
Her child of Darkness…
My precious sapphire orb,
Shining so bright in these shimmering, endless skies,
Singing the song that I know so well…
Thinking of that individual that inhabits my dreams, my waking hours, my thoughts…
He who shall forever reign,
Great ruler of the mind,
My corrupted, beautiful mind…
The beginning hues of Dawn crawl across the horizon,
She is soon to leave me again,
Alone, in this blinding, bitter embrace,
Slave to the brightest of all stars…
The jealous sun is almost present,
She slowly fades away,
A lingering smile of reassurance…
She shall return for me,
Later when the sun is defeated, annihilated,
And Obscurity paints His dark picture across the incessant canvas once more…


[comments] => 4 [counter] => 162 [topic] => 19 [informant] => FleurdeSang [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => InspirationalPoems )
Blue Moon

Contributed by FleurdeSang on Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 04:13:48 PM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems



She observes,
Adorned in gleaming tresses of cerulean sins,
Shining brilliantly in the diamond showered night…
Beautiful, seductive, alluring,
She stands gracefully, beckoning to all that see her…
Naïve as children, they follow,
Her sweet song enrapturing them in splendor, endless bliss…
Dancing so elegantly,
A waltz of dreams,
Across the raven skies…
So beguiling, so enticing…
My inspiration, my Mother, my eternal Muse…
A sweet kiss is given,
On the crown of my head…
A pallid kiss, in which you must be worthy of giving…
An embrace of ghostly love,
In which I can only find when she is present…
Her world, so enthralling,
Forever to be in this spell…
How I love this love,
This affection between nature and Her child,
Her child of Darkness…
My precious sapphire orb,
Shining so bright in these shimmering, endless skies,
Singing the song that I know so well…
Thinking of that individual that inhabits my dreams, my waking hours, my thoughts…
He who shall forever reign,
Great ruler of the mind,
My corrupted, beautiful mind…
The beginning hues of Dawn crawl across the horizon,
She is soon to leave me again,
Alone, in this blinding, bitter embrace,
Slave to the brightest of all stars…
The jealous sun is almost present,
She slowly fades away,
A lingering smile of reassurance…
She shall return for me,
Later when the sun is defeated, annihilated,
And Obscurity paints His dark picture across the incessant canvas once more…






Copyright © FleurdeSang ... [ 2004-10-12 16:13:48]
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Re: Blue Moon (User Rating: 1 )
by Hurretje on Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 05:00:43 AM AEST
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Wonderful piece of art... When all the nights are out, inspiration begins to glow and flow...
Hugs,
Hur


Re: Blue Moon (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 09:40:54 AM AEST
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Very talented FleurdeSang.

You Soothe my soul with your words of love.
Your words in this poem give me so much pleasure beyond measure.
I am in awe of the magnificent beauty which I envisaged through your words.

Thank you for touching my soul


Love Sweetangelukxxxxx


Re: Blue Moon (User Rating: 1 )
by Nazmythian on Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 03:35:13 PM AEST
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Stunningly beautiful, ma chère fleur. You have such an ability to evoke emotion in the words you send accross the screen of this computer. I am in awe at the way you can describe the night. I see the moon, many of the same stars, but you paint them so clearly, so ... fantastically that they don't appear to be the same ones I stand outside at night and gaze upon !

Nazmythian ~


Re: Blue Moon (User Rating: 1 )
by Seikjo on Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 12:56:46 PM AEST
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Yes me again but i love your writing it soo wonderful...sorry i sound like some prep.




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