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Array ( [sid] => 67202 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Your Way [time] => 2004-10-12 23:31:59 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Your smile warms me up each day,
More than warmth from the sun.
This kind’s nice though,
It’s not too hot, or not hot enough,
But the perfect warmth

And when I hear you talk?
Who else could bear not to listen?
Your voice melts all my fears away,
And it’s not temporary,
But lasts forever.

The way you treat me
Reminds me of icecream.
You know, the kind that is super rich,
And you always want more?
But the way you treat me doesn’t need to be better

Maybe it’s just YOU,
The way you act, or look.
Maybe it’s the way that you care,
Care about me
Maybe its just because I love you [comments] => 3 [counter] => 155 [topic] => 2 [informant] => humboldthunny17 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Your Way

Contributed by humboldthunny17 on Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 11:31:59 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Your smile warms me up each day,
More than warmth from the sun.
This kind’s nice though,
It’s not too hot, or not hot enough,
But the perfect warmth

And when I hear you talk?
Who else could bear not to listen?
Your voice melts all my fears away,
And it’s not temporary,
But lasts forever.

The way you treat me
Reminds me of icecream.
You know, the kind that is super rich,
And you always want more?
But the way you treat me doesn’t need to be better

Maybe it’s just YOU,
The way you act, or look.
Maybe it’s the way that you care,
Care about me
Maybe its just because I love you

Copyright Â© humboldthunny17 ... [ 2004-10-12 23:31:59]
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Re: Your Way (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 11:41:45 PM AEST
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Very beautifull write. anyone would luv this masterpeice of the beauty of luv.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: Your Way (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 01:12:12 AM AEST
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So intensely tender and written with such a pure feeling, you make love sound so real, I am glad someone has found true love.
Awesome poem.

Re: Your Way (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 08:44:47 PM AEST
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This is wonderful. Beautiful, simply beautiful. Great write. Welcome to YPDC if it's not too late or anything.

Spazzo

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