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Array ( [sid] => 67213 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => AS I WALK AWAY [time] => 2004-10-13 02:55:50 [hometext] => [bodytext] =>


I have made a few decisions

That I think might interest you

Because you once said you Loved me

But that is no longer true

You know that I have loved you

For a Long time now you agree

But the time has never come

That you have promised me

I know you had good intentions

But that has changed now too

So the time for me to dissappear

Is what I think that I must do

I can't go on being hurt like this

You see I have real feelings in my heart

They have started to become ragged

You are tearing me apart

I even told you baby

exactly how I feel

The things I said to you

Still are all so very real

I have told you long before this

That you did not need me any more

But you kept saying I was crazy

You said you Loved me even more

So each time I had asked you

What was going on with your life

You gave me another reason

But I just knew it just did not feel right

Please understand my Reasons

I feel that I am justified

I am tired of being without you

Many tears for you I have cried

Why you could not just let me go

A long time before now

But you didn't and I can't change that

I will get past all this some how

Don't you think that I don't Love you

In Fact I am still in Love with you

But that dosn't keep me warm at night

So to stay I see no use.

Now Please don't try and stop me

As I walk away from you

There is nothing else that I have to give

I have not already given you

Just remember me sometime

When I am no longer there

And remember that I might have been

If you just showed me you really cared.

I remember what you told me

The last time that we talked

That was the last thing I needed to know

And made me see I had to go

All I wanted was your love you see

You gave it once but then took it back from me

and to this day I don't Understand

What I did that changed all our plans

I accept it now as being the truth

I have already lost you so there is no use.


Written by Jean Marie Boudreau

october 8th 2004

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AS I WALK AWAY

Contributed by jeannoh on Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 02:55:50 AM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry






I have made a few decisions

That I think might interest you

Because you once said you Loved me

But that is no longer true

You know that I have loved you

For a Long time now you agree

But the time has never come

That you have promised me

I know you had good intentions

But that has changed now too

So the time for me to dissappear

Is what I think that I must do

I can't go on being hurt like this

You see I have real feelings in my heart

They have started to become ragged

You are tearing me apart

I even told you baby

exactly how I feel

The things I said to you

Still are all so very real

I have told you long before this

That you did not need me any more

But you kept saying I was crazy

You said you Loved me even more

So each time I had asked you

What was going on with your life

You gave me another reason

But I just knew it just did not feel right

Please understand my Reasons

I feel that I am justified

I am tired of being without you

Many tears for you I have cried

Why you could not just let me go

A long time before now

But you didn't and I can't change that

I will get past all this some how

Don't you think that I don't Love you

In Fact I am still in Love with you

But that dosn't keep me warm at night

So to stay I see no use.

Now Please don't try and stop me

As I walk away from you

There is nothing else that I have to give

I have not already given you

Just remember me sometime

When I am no longer there

And remember that I might have been

If you just showed me you really cared.

I remember what you told me

The last time that we talked

That was the last thing I needed to know

And made me see I had to go

All I wanted was your love you see

You gave it once but then took it back from me

and to this day I don't Understand

What I did that changed all our plans

I accept it now as being the truth

I have already lost you so there is no use.


Written by Jean Marie Boudreau

october 8th 2004





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Re: AS I WALK AWAY (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 03:50:38 AM AEST
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very sad but written well.
Hang tuff.
luv, huggs, strength,
emy




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