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[sid] => 6724
[catid] => 1
[aid] => Mick
[title] => °°°Black Mask°°°
[time] => 2002-11-15 09:00:00
[hometext] => Everyone's asked what goes on behind closed doors..but do you really get an honest answer?..
[bodytext] => How many times have you always complained
About my feet upon that old table stained
Or said that i shouldnt be wearing that dress
And how ugly my hair was it's such a mess
How many times have you called me bad names
The ones that hurt, that left me maimed
I wonder if you can count truly to me
The number of times that you abused me
When my ribs were broken and i couldnt walk
You laughed in my face and then wanted to talk
You said i was worthless and nobody would see
Any beauty inside my heart because i'm so ugly
When i used to smoke you would burn my arms
You burnt my face, you caused me so much harm
All because i wanted to snuggle with you
You said no and my whipping was way past due
You threw me into our bed at mornings daylight
My clothes were ripped off and my arms you tied
You played with my body and told me to beg
You wanted to tease me so you tied my legs
I screamed for you to please stop hurting me
You said yes that's it girl keep begging me
You hit me again then kissed my lips right away
And licked my blood dripping down shoulder's way
You said shut up woman your not worthy to talk
You stuffed my mouth with a dirty sock
You turned me around and you spanked me so hard
With that big wooden board with your name you carved
I cried bent over your leg so hard that day
You then rolled me over and said it's time to play
You took me in every way that you could
As my crying turned you on you said this is so good
You took your fist and you hit on my ribs
And whispered i love you and told your fibs
You scratched my arms and you bruised my face
You said i was a good girl, as you embraced
When you finished with me you untied my arms
You untied my legs knowing you'd caused harm
You said go wash up that we had things to do
I did as you said just to hear you say "i love you"
You held me tight for the rest of that day
The doorbell rang you said do it my way
When they came inside they said what's wrong may i ask?
I said oh it was nothing, smiling with my black mask
They stared at my husband knowing all to well
But they brushed it off because friends don't tell
How come people don't help when they know it's wrong
All they do is smile and act so brave and strong
They laughed and they giggled and thought nothing more
While i smiled my black mask,and my heart was torn
I go through this with you because my love is true
And your the only one in my life who says "i love you"
[comments] => 13
[counter] => 238
[topic] => 13
[informant] => OreO
[notes] =>
[ihome] => 0
[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 24
[ratings] => 5
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => DarkPoetry
)
°°°Black Mask°°°
Contributed by
OreO
on
Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 09:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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How many times have you always complained
About my feet upon that old table stained
Or said that i shouldnt be wearing that dress
And how ugly my hair was it's such a mess
How many times have you called me bad names
The ones that hurt, that left me maimed
I wonder if you can count truly to me
The number of times that you abused me
When my ribs were broken and i couldnt walk
You laughed in my face and then wanted to talk
You said i was worthless and nobody would see
Any beauty inside my heart because i'm so ugly
When i used to smoke you would burn my arms
You burnt my face, you caused me so much harm
All because i wanted to snuggle with you
You said no and my whipping was way past due
You threw me into our bed at mornings daylight
My clothes were ripped off and my arms you tied
You played with my body and told me to beg
You wanted to tease me so you tied my legs
I screamed for you to please stop hurting me
You said yes that's it girl keep begging me
You hit me again then kissed my lips right away
And licked my blood dripping down shoulder's way
You said shut up woman your not worthy to talk
You stuffed my mouth with a dirty sock
You turned me around and you spanked me so hard
With that big wooden board with your name you carved
I cried bent over your leg so hard that day
You then rolled me over and said it's time to play
You took me in every way that you could
As my crying turned you on you said this is so good
You took your fist and you hit on my ribs
And whispered i love you and told your fibs
You scratched my arms and you bruised my face
You said i was a good girl, as you embraced
When you finished with me you untied my arms
You untied my legs knowing you'd caused harm
You said go wash up that we had things to do
I did as you said just to hear you say "i love you"
You held me tight for the rest of that day
The doorbell rang you said do it my way
When they came inside they said what's wrong may i ask?
I said oh it was nothing, smiling with my black mask
They stared at my husband knowing all to well
But they brushed it off because friends don't tell
How come people don't help when they know it's wrong
All they do is smile and act so brave and strong
They laughed and they giggled and thought nothing more
While i smiled my black mask,and my heart was torn
I go through this with you because my love is true
And your the only one in my life who says "i love you"
Copyright ©
OreO
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2002-11-15 09:00:00]
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Re: °°°Black Mask°°°
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 09:07:58 AM AEST
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| Oh, Oreo, If this is true, I hope you leave him, I'll stand beside you, you deserve much better, lots of love to you |
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Re: °°°Black Mask°°°
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by Fwog on
Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 09:19:13 AM AEST
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OreO my beautiful friend oh f----I can't handle this.
Stop it. It is not love. It is violence at it's worst.
You are beautiful and deserving of love, not this vile abuse. I read you and bask in your beauty.
Please I beg you. Stop it now.
You are wrapped in my love,
Fwog |
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Re: °°°Black Mask°°°
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by Hollie85 on
Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 09:37:29 AM AEST
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| If this is true you should stop this relationship. No one deserves to be abused like this and especially someone with such talent. Thank you for sharing such horror and peace be with you. |
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Re: °°°Black Mask°°°
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 09:39:04 AM AEST
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Hey Oreo...I have to agree with Fwog... You don't deserve that....
Hugs,
Jenni |
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Re: °°°Black Mask°°°
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by LOWMAN613 on
Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 09:44:03 AM AEST
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Oreo, this was really deep stuff here!
I can't imagine this is you?????????
If so You do need that hug!
There are some people out there that dont wish to tell what goes on good or bad,scary to think the bad happens more than we think!
God poetry!!! Christina |
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Re: °°°Black Mask°°°
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by Rakerman1999 on
Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 10:36:05 AM AEST
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| If this is a true story of your life...tell the a--hole ...I live in the USA ... am not afraid of travel...and would like to see the look on his face when I have my hands around his throat. Rakerman1999@aol.com....E me if ya need me. |
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Re: °°°Black Mask°°°
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by DreamWeaver on
Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 01:50:16 PM AEST
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| Oreo .... I'm sure this is from your past as you are such a boundlessly happy person now .... it shines through in the way you speak in the forums .... regardless, this is a really distressing poem and forms terrible images - I pray that you have found some peace since then. A wonderful poem. |
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Re: °°°Black Mask°°°
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by frozensuicide on
Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 03:49:35 PM AEST
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| ooooooooooh i dig this one! your pretty good there! did this happen in real life?! if it did, we should go beat him up! cause no one deserves it! NO ONE! if not, we should draw his character! THEN RIP IT TO SHREDS! YA! |
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Re: °°°Black Mask°°°
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by viola on
Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 10:21:33 PM AEST
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| What the? Oreo please tell me this isn't true. You are too beautiful a person for this. I live in Oz and will still come help everyone kick his ass. |
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Re: °°°Black Mask°°°
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by wyrd_faerie on
Saturday, 16th November 2002 @ 05:55:12 AM AEST
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Oreo, you don't deserve this. all i want to do is dry your tears, hug you and tell you it'll be ok, but i can't. if this is true, you have to leave that place. please, for your own sake, you're too beautiful for this
all my thoughts, though i know they're not worth much
xxx |
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Re: °°°Black Mask°°°
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by spaceotter on
Monday, 18th November 2002 @ 05:26:43 PM AEST
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| Oreo, this is a great poem, but a terrible situation. I hope you can pull away from this if it is happening to you right now. You're such a compassionate and caring person. No one deserves this kind of treatment, especially you. |
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Re: °°°Black Mask°°°
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by adsalamon on
Saturday, 23rd November 2002 @ 02:16:21 AM AEST
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this is good. me like it. ty
Adrian |
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Re: °°°Black Mask°°°
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 08:44:34 PM AEST
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| powerful write girl. well told, with a great grabber---your black mask. awsome. jim |
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