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Array ( [sid] => 67243 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A Deep Penetration [time] => 2004-10-13 11:46:14 [hometext] => never felt something so deep... [bodytext] => What you give to me is deep penetration,
That can be felt over the entire nation,
You penetrate so deep into me,
Setting every part of my insides free.

Slowly you have penetrated my heart,
Made me feel love right from the start,
You reached me in a way no-one else did,
Into your passionate world I dreamily slid.

It’s as if you could hear all my prayers,
When I needed love you were there,
My eyes are no longer shut tight,
I’ve wanted you since I first took a bite.

I am laid bare for you to indulge,
Take me in until you feel so full,
I am yours & you are mine,
A word to describe our love; divine.

I hold onto you like my life depends,
I feel so much for you that’ll never end,
It will only grow as will our desires,
Of you my love I would never tire.

You have long become my soul mate,
You are the most precious thing to date,
Long live the legacy of you & I,
I want to be with you as time goes by.






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A Deep Penetration

Contributed by pixie on Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 11:46:14 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



What you give to me is deep penetration,
That can be felt over the entire nation,
You penetrate so deep into me,
Setting every part of my insides free.

Slowly you have penetrated my heart,
Made me feel love right from the start,
You reached me in a way no-one else did,
Into your passionate world I dreamily slid.

It’s as if you could hear all my prayers,
When I needed love you were there,
My eyes are no longer shut tight,
I’ve wanted you since I first took a bite.

I am laid bare for you to indulge,
Take me in until you feel so full,
I am yours & you are mine,
A word to describe our love; divine.

I hold onto you like my life depends,
I feel so much for you that’ll never end,
It will only grow as will our desires,
Of you my love I would never tire.

You have long become my soul mate,
You are the most precious thing to date,
Long live the legacy of you & I,
I want to be with you as time goes by.










Copyright © pixie ... [ 2004-10-13 11:46:14]
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Re: A Deep Penetration (User Rating: 1 )
by MickeyPigKnuckles on Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 11:59:44 AM AEST
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What an awesome poem this one is with such a deep message. You are so wonderful and I can only hope a small part of you rubs off onto me. Great creation. Thank You
MickeyPigKnuckles :o)


Re: A Deep Penetration (User Rating: 1 )
by Nazmythian on Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 12:13:49 PM AEST
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Beautiful Pixie, just beautiful. The recipient is truly a lucky man. It flows wonderfully. I like it alot !!!

Nazmythian ~


Re: A Deep Penetration (User Rating: 1 )
by Broken_Skin on Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 12:42:20 PM AEST
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Pixie, you're amazing!

5 stars x x x


Re: A Deep Penetration (User Rating: 1 )
by skyblumoon on Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 01:57:30 PM AEST
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Very beautiful. You have a wonderful way of expressing yourself from the heart.
Blu


Re: A Deep Penetration (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 06:09:41 PM AEST
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beautiful Pixie
Michelle


Re: A Deep Penetration (User Rating: 1 )
by Bruce on Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 09:05:06 PM AEST
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Super to feel this way. great write again. stay feeling the way you do.


Re: A Deep Penetration (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 09:27:53 PM AEST
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Loved the title, that's what caught my eye. Very beautiful write.


Re: A Deep Penetration (User Rating: 1 )
by lovesucks on Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 11:46:19 PM AEST
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Magnificent.....nothing else to say just magnificent




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