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Array ( [sid] => 67249 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I'm Like... Your The... [time] => 2004-10-13 12:24:21 [hometext] => I love this poem. It expresses how I really felt at the time. [bodytext] => I'm like a rag doll
You're the child
That has pulled the stuffing out of me
& thrown her away
To be broken in some dark & damp alley.

I'm like a seal
You're the shark
That has torn the flesh from my bones.
Leaving me drowning
On the bloody ocean floor.

I'm like the steer gone to the kill barn
You're the master of the sledgehammer
That has confused me with you're blows
Leaving me stunned & mindless
My brains leaking on the cold floor.

I'm like the opera singer
You're the phantom of my opera
Tearing the song from my throat
With your cruel words & cold heart

I'm like the town
You're the volcano
That has dumped hot lava & ash on me
Leaving me crumbling to the ground
With nothing left but the heat of your anger

I'm like the farm
You're the tornado
Striking without warning, & turning my world upside down.
Leaving nothing but the ruins
Splinters of me in your aftermath.

I'm like the cat in the street
You're the car that has ran over me
Leaving nothing but my
Blood & guts on the pavement

I'm like the prisoner locked inside myself, my cell
You're the warden holding my spirit captive
Dashing my elusive hopes into a thousand pieces
But the prison attitude isn't in me it's in you

I'm like the dream
You're the nightmare
The Grim Reaper
Coming to take my life.
Casting aside my future
Rolling a stone in front of my door & laying me in a tomb.

I'm like an angel
You're the devil
Who had me sell my soul
For the price of my sanity.

I'm like...
The heart...
The soul...
The core...
The mind...
You're...
The arrogance...
The anger...
The narcissist...
The angry words...
The proud attitude...
Coming to bring me to my knees
Leaving me crying
Leaving you alone
With your cold & callused heart.
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I'm Like... Your The...

Contributed by skyblumoon on Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 12:24:21 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



I'm like a rag doll
You're the child
That has pulled the stuffing out of me
& thrown her away
To be broken in some dark & damp alley.

I'm like a seal
You're the shark
That has torn the flesh from my bones.
Leaving me drowning
On the bloody ocean floor.

I'm like the steer gone to the kill barn
You're the master of the sledgehammer
That has confused me with you're blows
Leaving me stunned & mindless
My brains leaking on the cold floor.

I'm like the opera singer
You're the phantom of my opera
Tearing the song from my throat
With your cruel words & cold heart

I'm like the town
You're the volcano
That has dumped hot lava & ash on me
Leaving me crumbling to the ground
With nothing left but the heat of your anger

I'm like the farm
You're the tornado
Striking without warning, & turning my world upside down.
Leaving nothing but the ruins
Splinters of me in your aftermath.

I'm like the cat in the street
You're the car that has ran over me
Leaving nothing but my
Blood & guts on the pavement

I'm like the prisoner locked inside myself, my cell
You're the warden holding my spirit captive
Dashing my elusive hopes into a thousand pieces
But the prison attitude isn't in me it's in you

I'm like the dream
You're the nightmare
The Grim Reaper
Coming to take my life.
Casting aside my future
Rolling a stone in front of my door & laying me in a tomb.

I'm like an angel
You're the devil
Who had me sell my soul
For the price of my sanity.

I'm like...
The heart...
The soul...
The core...
The mind...
You're...
The arrogance...
The anger...
The narcissist...
The angry words...
The proud attitude...
Coming to bring me to my knees
Leaving me crying
Leaving you alone
With your cold & callused heart.




Copyright © skyblumoon ... [ 2004-10-13 12:24:21]
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Re: I'm Like... Your The... (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 12:29:51 PM AEST
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wow, that was amazing, well worded and expressed,

pixie xx


Re: I'm Like... Your The... (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 01:05:06 PM AEST
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Beautiful, very awesome. I hope you are feeling better.

Spazzo


Re: I'm Like... Your The... (User Rating: 1 )
by Quilted_rag_doll on Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 04:14:40 PM AEST
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wow. that iz simply beautiful! its completly wonderfull.
i haven't enjoyed reading a poem this much in a while.
very good! i love the whole style! its awesome, nicely
worded. total five stars! great work!

¤~::.. a n d e..::~¤


Re: I'm Like... Your The... (User Rating: 1 )
by izzy on Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 04:20:50 PM AEST
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Great poem. Glad I wasn't your inspiration on this one.
Love ya
Izzy


Re: I'm Like... Your The... (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 04:45:15 PM AEST
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very nice.


Re: I'm Like... Your The... (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 06:24:32 PM AEST
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Excellent write..I loved the analogy used....
You have a masterpiece here....
Jenni


Re: I'm Like... Your The... (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 11:03:32 AM AEST
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Wow that was deep and full of all different kinds of emotions. very powerful.

~:: darkangeleyes57 ::~




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