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Array ( [sid] => 67280 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Adoration [time] => 2004-10-13 16:04:36 [hometext] => Verses 6 and 7 are a daydream, occuring in the split second between him looking up and saying hi... I could understand why that would be confusing but I don't like poems to be too obvious. This is my first real poem. I'm 17. [bodytext] => He's like an angel
Blonde hair, soft voice
Innocence incarnate

I watch him
Fiddling with the microphone
Lost in thought

flick

He raises his eyebrows as it swings back towards him
Looks up and sees me watching
Smiles

I flush.

Now we're outside, or inside
Watching a movie, listening to music,
or just talking.
Sitting side by side,
So close I can feel his warmth.
Our knees touch

He looks at me, and I don't look away
My arm over his shoulder
Fingers sliding through his hair
His lips
Soft
Slow
Shy, at first
Then, suddenly,
I feel like I found
Something I never thought I could have

"Hi!" he calls, and waves. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 175 [topic] => 2 [informant] => ladyaryssa [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Adoration

Contributed by ladyaryssa on Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 04:04:36 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

He's like an angel
Blonde hair, soft voice
Innocence incarnate

I watch him
Fiddling with the microphone
Lost in thought

flick

He raises his eyebrows as it swings back towards him
Looks up and sees me watching
Smiles

I flush.

Now we're outside, or inside
Watching a movie, listening to music,
or just talking.
Sitting side by side,
So close I can feel his warmth.
Our knees touch

He looks at me, and I don't look away
My arm over his shoulder
Fingers sliding through his hair
His lips
Soft
Slow
Shy, at first
Then, suddenly,
I feel like I found
Something I never thought I could have

"Hi!" he calls, and waves.

Copyright © ladyaryssa ... [ 2004-10-13 16:04:36]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Adoration (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 04:10:28 PM AEST
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Sort of like my first computer, really - engrossing and entertaining, for a while.

Oh, welcome to YPDC.
Keep writing - this is better than my first poem.

Re: Adoration (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 08:33:13 PM AEST
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Brilliant write....
Welcome to YPDC.......
Looking forward to more..
Jenni

Re: Adoration (User Rating: 1 )
by zenmind on Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 01:53:59 PM AEST
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Wow
Very impressive. I love how you captured the moment so fluidly and clearly. I look forward to reading more.

Be True,
zenmind

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