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Never Ending Circle
Contributed by
izzy
on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 04:05:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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You are my Skye so open above me You are my Blu ocean so deep You are my Moone that lights my path In the wanderings of a simple man I've found a dynamic woman Who helped me to find the meaning of life To love & hold for life To help & protect for life To talk & listen to for life Find, I did find a women who is strong A lady who can show me my strengths Love & compassion in our hearts to keep Everlasting in mind Everlasting in body Everlasting in soul To you Skye Blu Moone The paths we take may fork & bend To the beginning of a circle that has no end
Copyright ©
izzy
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2004-10-13 16:05:05] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Never Ending Circle
(User Rating: 1 ) by skyblumoon on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 04:47:28 PM AEST (User
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I'm jealous. I wish I could write with such passion and feeling when it comes to love. Keep writing your very good. Thank you for another masterpiece.
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Re: Never Ending Circle
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyaryssa on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 04:49:43 PM AEST (User
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I hate to be evil, but... I think it's two-dimensional. And it's more about you than her, or so I feel. On the plus side, it is sweet and appropriate to be written for a future wife, I'm sure she'll love it. |
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