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Array ( [sid] => 67356 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Stayed Awake All Night [time] => 2004-10-14 00:41:40 [hometext] => [bodytext] =>
Don't want to hear no more
I ain't dancing
no I don't wanna sing,
shadows are rising
the fires of heaven flicker
as I once again
F
A
L
L
Downnnnnn....
feels so very cold
as my heart of stone
s h a t t e r s
on the ground.

I scream and I cry
as Saddness and sorrow
take over
making me
not wanna wake up tommorrow
to deal with the pain.

I walk I talk
convince myself everything is fine
but deep inside I know
my descent will persist,
as i fall
scenes flow by
I laugh I cry I fade I die
and become a mist.
why do I exsist?.....

[comments] => 4 [counter] => 155 [topic] => 60 [informant] => secretwind [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => insomniac )

Stayed Awake All Night

Contributed by secretwind on Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 12:41:40 AM in AEST
Topic: insomniac

Don't want to hear no more
I ain't dancing
no I don't wanna sing,
shadows are rising
the fires of heaven flicker
as I once again
F
A
L
L
Downnnnnn....
feels so very cold
as my heart of stone
s h a t t e r s
on the ground.

I scream and I cry
as Saddness and sorrow
take over
making me
not wanna wake up tommorrow
to deal with the pain.

I walk I talk
convince myself everything is fine
but deep inside I know
my descent will persist,
as i fall
scenes flow by
I laugh I cry I fade I die
and become a mist.
why do I exsist?.....

Copyright © secretwind ... [ 2004-10-14 00:41:40]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Stayed Awake All Night (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 12:46:42 AM AEST
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Very sad but u get your point across very well.
luv, huggs,
emy

Re: Stayed Awake All Night (User Rating: 1 )
by Ronald on Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 01:14:08 AM AEST
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I understand that feeling. It's all so familiar to me. Sometimes we question God about our existence but I'm sure He has a purpose fo us in our life and that's why He brought us to life. I think everybody in this world is somehow or rather looking for his/her purpose. Well, you're not alone with that feeling. I've been there and I know it all too well. I hope you'll find you ascent soon. Anyway, great poem and would like to wish you well.

Re: Stayed Awake All Night (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 05:22:48 AM AEST
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this iz great, i love how u set it out

Re: Stayed Awake All Night (User Rating: 1 )
by Broken_Skin on Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 12:11:46 PM AEST
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wow, that was bloody ace. Nice one
glad I red that

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