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Array ( [sid] => 6760 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Because, He's My World, You See [time] => 2002-11-15 20:20:00 [hometext] => My inspiration is my "little guy" grandson. [bodytext] => My little hands are folded
As I kneel beside my bed
I'm okay right now, God
'Cause my Dad's just coming in
Dear God, I love my Daddy
As far as my little eyes can see
He has to leave me in the mornings, God
He says,"To make a home for me."
I'd go without my shoes, God
I don't need much to eat
Pizza, God, just pizza
It's our own special treat
Some times he's late
My little heart aches
I'm only five, you see.
I'll need him for all my tomorrows
Please, God, bring him home to me. [comments] => 9 [counter] => 239 [topic] => 23 [informant] => Dot [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FamilyPoems )

Because, He's My World, You See

Contributed by Dot on Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 08:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic: FamilyPoems

My little hands are folded
As I kneel beside my bed
I'm okay right now, God
'Cause my Dad's just coming in
Dear God, I love my Daddy
As far as my little eyes can see
He has to leave me in the mornings, God
He says,"To make a home for me."
I'd go without my shoes, God
I don't need much to eat
Pizza, God, just pizza
It's our own special treat
Some times he's late
My little heart aches
I'm only five, you see.
I'll need him for all my tomorrows
Please, God, bring him home to me.

Copyright © Dot ... [ 2002-11-15 20:20:00]
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Re: Because, He's My World, You See (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 09:19:29 PM AEST
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This is so sweet ... well written.

Re: Because, He's My World, You See (User Rating: 1 )
by Valerie_Pearson on Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 10:35:19 PM AEST
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how sweet Dot, your grandson is very blessed with a wonderful grandma, thanks for sharing

Re: Because, He's My World, You See (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 10:53:06 PM AEST
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AAWW Dorothy,this is really cute!My sons feel this with their daddy hes a truck driver & not always home to be the dad they want!Great words! Christina

Re: Because, He's My World, You See (User Rating: 1 )
by Dot on Sunday, 17th November 2002 @ 05:31:12 AM AEST
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Thank you DreamWeaver for reading my poem. I really appreciate it. Dot

Re: Because, He's My World, You See (User Rating: 1 )
by Dot on Sunday, 17th November 2002 @ 05:33:09 AM AEST
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Val, thank you for your continuing support. I love hearing from you. God bless. Dot

Re: Because, He's My World, You See (User Rating: 1 )
by Dot on Sunday, 17th November 2002 @ 05:35:25 AM AEST
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Thanks so much for taking the time to read and comment on my poem, Christina. Moms & Dads are so important to the little ones. Dot

Re: Because, He's My World, You See (User Rating: 1 )
by Yellowrose on Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 10:11:45 AM AEST
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What a PERFECT poem you have composed, insipired by your grandson.This poem is very INSPIRING . I Thank you for reading my work/ works. Yellowrose

Re: Because, He's My World, You See (User Rating: 1 )
by Dot on Friday, 22nd November 2002 @ 05:23:31 AM AEST
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Thank you very much, Yellow Rose. I appreciate your kind words. Could you tell me how to read your poems? Dot

Re: Because, He's My World, You See (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 02:51:21 PM AEST
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so beautiful......my littlest never got to say this prayer, but im sure he would have..........huggs & love to you and yours, always nessa

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