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Blue Eyes
Contributed by
RhythmBndt
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Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 08:59:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Blue eyed baby boy Timid, soft spoken Yet boisterous and bold Kisses so soft As the stroke of a feather Skin creamy smooth Hands rough like leather Massaging my body Stroking my skin Stirring my passions I've held deep within Bringing the side of me I like to keep hidden Up to the surface It feels too good As if it's forbidden I don't really know Tomorrow where we will be I do know that you Have awakened something in me The epitome of sweetness And all that is good Yet the devil reincarnate Reflected in those eyes of blue
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Re: Blue Eyes
(User Rating: 1 ) by sweetangeluk on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 09:43:53 AM AEST (User
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Oh how i know the power of what eyes can do to your soul.
Blue eyes >>>she sighs>>>> for now sees them deep within tearing at her heart.
I wrote a poem called forever blue eyes reminded me a little of this.
A passionate write if it feels good and makes you happy so be it let it flow
Marvellous poem
Love Angelxxxx
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Re: Blue Eyes
(User Rating: 1 ) by Anesthetic on
Wednesday, 1st October 2008 @ 08:57:52 PM AEST (User
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Blue eyes aye, how they betray the heart. Very good write.
Keep up the great work:)
~Charli~ |
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Re: Blue Eyes
(User Rating: 1 ) by IrshLass on
Friday, 23rd July 2010 @ 06:15:20 PM AEST (User
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Wonderful poem. I love it. |
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