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Look around what will you find
Lost in a room filled with blood
All of a sudden it begins to flood

Up to your neck in crimson red
Inside my mind you think you’re dead
You close your eyes, shaking with fright
Open your eyes and there is no more light

Lost in this pitch black repression
Can’t find your way out of my dark depression
Now you’re stuck in my mind forever more
You’ll feel such pain never felt before

On your knees you pray for sweet death
Just take that last wondrous breath
Oh no my friend that will not take place
You’ll stay there stuck in my dark space

I’ll make you suffer, feel my pain
Feel all my sadness and disdain
Inside my mind you’ll never die
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My Psychotic Mind

Contributed by CrimsonTears on Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 11:11:03 PM in AEST
Topic: psychoticpoems

Climb into my psychotic mind
Look around what will you find
Lost in a room filled with blood
All of a sudden it begins to flood

Up to your neck in crimson red
Inside my mind you think you’re dead
You close your eyes, shaking with fright
Open your eyes and there is no more light

Lost in this pitch black repression
Can’t find your way out of my dark depression
Now you’re stuck in my mind forever more
You’ll feel such pain never felt before

On your knees you pray for sweet death
Just take that last wondrous breath
Oh no my friend that will not take place
You’ll stay there stuck in my dark space

I’ll make you suffer, feel my pain
Feel all my sadness and disdain
Inside my mind you’ll never die
Feel every single tear that I cry

Copyright Â© CrimsonTears ... [ 2004-10-15 23:11:03]
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Re: My Psychotic Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by Gimpie on Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 11:33:48 PM AEST
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This is an absolute awesome poem. psychotic yes, but wonderfully written. Good Job.

Re: My Psychotic Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 11:37:23 PM AEST
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excellent write. well written and intriguing. i liked your last stanza the best because of the power in it.

Re: My Psychotic Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by gt on Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 11:53:50 PM AEST
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Great poem, really deep. I think the rhythm is broken too often, but other than that fantastic

Re: My Psychotic Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 12:34:17 AM AEST
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I've often felt that way about my own head before. Great write.

Re: My Psychotic Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by MomentInTime on Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 01:34:10 AM AEST
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Let me into your mind and I may find something altogether different.

Great write

Jordan :o)

Re: My Psychotic Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 02:54:59 AM AEST
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rythem and flow, a deep poem, with alot of emotion and clear images, so cool to read, soundz like a mind to complement mine, cheers for sharing such a cool talent to mezmerize.

Re: My Psychotic Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by inoc on Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 03:14:11 AM AEST
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I thought it was brilliant
cheers!~

Re: My Psychotic Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by Avarice_Riot on Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 04:44:50 AM AEST
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I really enjoyed reading that, it's an awesome write...I think it would be even cooler if it were made into a song :)

Re: My Psychotic Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by EVERxSOxSWEET on Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 06:18:32 PM AEST
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Very emotional and deep. I felt your pain on that one. Excellent Work.

Re: My Psychotic Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by ALineAboveTheStepBeneath on Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 02:34:14 PM AEST
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Very nicely done.

Re: My Psychotic Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by assassinatorgirl on Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 04:08:05 PM AEST
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beautiful...i never knew someone felt the same way as i did. great job!

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