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[sid] => 67649
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => Rape
[time] => 2004-10-16 03:13:29
[hometext] => ...Reason one for not trusting people fully...
[bodytext] => Tears on my pillow
At night when I cry
I think to myself
"Why won't I just die?"
After I was left on the streets
Barely twelve years old
Thinking "How could a lover
Ever be so cold?"
As I lay there in panic
Watching you five leave
When I knew you were gone
I just had to greive
Trusting and caring
Was how I had been
I guess it was my fault
I let you in
But never ever
Could I have guessed
You mission in life
Was to see me undressed
To see me naked
Left nude on your floor
Then to do what you would
Until I could take it no more
Then let the next
And so on after that
Until I felt smaller
Than fleas on a rat
The into the ally
Where you could hit me
Where if I had died
No one would see
Walking away
I was left in the rain
Now i cry every night
Tears of pure pain
For the crime you committed
For the fact I couldn't escape
From the heart you had once had
Or the gang rape
[comments] => 11
[counter] => 255
[topic] => 66
[informant] => Kie-Kie
[notes] =>
[ihome] => 0
[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 20
[ratings] => 4
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => drugabuse
)
Rape
Contributed by
Kie-Kie
on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 03:13:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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Tears on my pillow
At night when I cry
I think to myself
"Why won't I just die?"
After I was left on the streets
Barely twelve years old
Thinking "How could a lover
Ever be so cold?"
As I lay there in panic
Watching you five leave
When I knew you were gone
I just had to greive
Trusting and caring
Was how I had been
I guess it was my fault
I let you in
But never ever
Could I have guessed
You mission in life
Was to see me undressed
To see me naked
Left nude on your floor
Then to do what you would
Until I could take it no more
Then let the next
And so on after that
Until I felt smaller
Than fleas on a rat
The into the ally
Where you could hit me
Where if I had died
No one would see
Walking away
I was left in the rain
Now i cry every night
Tears of pure pain
For the crime you committed
For the fact I couldn't escape
From the heart you had once had
Or the gang rape
Copyright ©
Kie-Kie
... [
2004-10-16 03:13:29]
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Re: Rape
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by inoc on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 03:19:29 AM AEST
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oh how cruel THEY are like wild animals!!!
I'm lost for words....
5 stars! |
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Re: Rape
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by shanarah on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 03:41:52 AM AEST
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this makes me angry right along with you!! so
sorry this has happened.
take care always,
shanarah... |
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Re: Rape
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by sweetangeluk on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 07:16:20 AM AEST
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How barbaric of them to do such an act. It sickens me inside to hear of your torment.
I pray that gods wrath be upon them for what they have put you through.
May only happiness be yours for the taking for it is only what you deserve in life for you were the victim.
Lots of love Sweetangelukxxxx
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Re: Rape
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by UnlovedChild on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 04:35:41 PM AEST
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| Aww ... kie / piper / lil sis / mommy !!! I hope that I can help you feel better. You are strong !!! |
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Re: Rape
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by Alina on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 04:40:16 PM AEST
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I can understand where you are coming from. I haven't been gang raped...but was date raped by three different people, three different times whenI was only 13. I especially don't trust people either. Especially guys.
ALINA
maybe you should read my poem "Living in Date Rape" under Drug Addiction and Abuse |
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Re: Rape
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by clotti on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 06:19:22 AM AEST
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| 'tears of pure pain' such a heart-felt line. this poem touched me and made me think i just wanted to tell you that. words to describe your pain are so well chosen and used. i really like this poem |
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Re: Rape
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by Avarice_Riot on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 01:24:10 AM AEST
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| Shoot..what a heartrending poem, i can't imagine what it would be like to feel this way. |
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Re: Rape
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by cuddlytiger17 on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 06:02:44 PM AEST
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| omg, i started crying when i read this...:( I was raped too, by an ex bf, but no wheres near to this degree. People are SOOO cruel, im so so sorry baby. *hugs* If you ever need anyone to talk to, I'm here, I promise. And I won't ask anything of you. |
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Re: Rape
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by lovesucks on
Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 08:57:06 AM AEST
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oh my god, I feel that pain, and really can't write on it with 100 curses in it. I will pray for you and during my last few months of addiction it happened more often than I ever expected. The last time I will never forget, because it was worse. Hang in there, there are people capable of love and caring.
The rainbows of life follow the storms
Theresa |
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Re: Rape
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by pixie on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 11:43:46 AM AEST
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wow kie, I had no idea *hugs* I am so sorry you had to endure this sort of ordel at the hands of these animals, you have been brave by sharing this with us all,
takecare,
pixie xx |
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Re: Rape
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by O7NeVeS on
Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 02:03:07 PM AEST
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that was a really great write...
i'm so sorry what you had to endure. Those guys should have their dick$ cut off!!
Tanya |
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