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Array ( [sid] => 67753 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Crossroads Of Twilight [time] => 2004-10-16 23:55:12 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Been thinking about
what I should do
tired of going
round and round
in circles with you.
Cycles of emotion
rotating
keeping me of balance
as I try to run,
you are the master
of
Illusion
you block my escape with confusion.

I remember the way
you use to fascinate
but now
that vision is shattered
and I need to get away.
Thee emotional torture
that I endure
sustains you
you love the way my pain taste,
In this burning Illusion
distortion reigns
all I can see
is your face.
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 196 [topic] => 60 [informant] => secretwind [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => insomniac )

Crossroads Of Twilight

Contributed by secretwind on Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 11:55:12 PM in AEST
Topic: insomniac

Been thinking about
what I should do
tired of going
round and round
in circles with you.
Cycles of emotion
rotating
keeping me of balance
as I try to run,
you are the master
of
Illusion
you block my escape with confusion.

I remember the way
you use to fascinate
but now
that vision is shattered
and I need to get away.
Thee emotional torture
that I endure
sustains you
you love the way my pain taste,
In this burning Illusion
distortion reigns
all I can see
is your face.

Copyright © secretwind ... [ 2004-10-16 23:55:12]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Crossroads Of Twilight (User Rating: 1 )
by sicknivesevered on Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 01:15:43 AM AEST
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I really like how you formatted it, and the line:

"In this burning Illusion
distortion reigns"

Re: Crossroads Of Twilight (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 01:16:27 AM AEST
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So very sad but written with percission.
It's really sad that someone could enjoy your pain.
I hope things work out for u really soon. I don't like to see anyone in pain as I've had more than my share of pain in the past.
Luv, huggs,
emy

Re: Crossroads Of Twilight (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 03:21:34 AM AEST
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AWESOME!

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