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[title] => Who Are You?
[time] => 2004-10-17 13:05:06
[hometext] => I'm fairly new at poetry, and this is my first post on this site. Tell me what you think.
[bodytext] => Who are you?
Was the question.
Whispered.
Behind the curtains.
Darting.
Around the corners.
Who are you?
Was the question.
Hidden.
Behind every door.
Lurking.
In the shadows.
Who are you?
Was the question.
Tucked.
Beneath the blankets.
Threaded.
Into every wisp of air.
Who am I?
She thought to herself.
But every time she searched for an answer,
It darted back.
Into the shadows.
Behind the curtains.
Always one step ahead.
Never being found.
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Who Are You?
Contributed by
Live2Die
on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 01:05:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Who are you?
Was the question.
Whispered.
Behind the curtains.
Darting.
Around the corners.
Who are you?
Was the question.
Hidden.
Behind every door.
Lurking.
In the shadows.
Who are you?
Was the question.
Tucked.
Beneath the blankets.
Threaded.
Into every wisp of air.
Who am I?
She thought to herself.
But every time she searched for an answer,
It darted back.
Into the shadows.
Behind the curtains.
Always one step ahead.
Never being found.
Copyright ©
Live2Die
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2004-10-17 13:05:06]
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Re: Who Are You?
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by xemptydecemberx on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 01:09:04 PM AEST
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| not bad at all, i look forward to reading more.. |
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Re: Who Are You?
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by pixie on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 01:09:47 PM AEST
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a very good write, I too hope to read more
pixie xx |
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Re: Who Are You?
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by 2ndChance on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 01:11:52 PM AEST
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| Congrats on your first masterpiece Live2Die, I also urge you to write more, and look foreward to every step of your poetic adulthood here on Your-Poetry...Welcome! |
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Re: Who Are You?
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by screwup on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 01:19:09 PM AEST
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very good indeed, welcome to the sight...
~screwup |
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Re: Who Are You?
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by UnlovedChild on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 01:31:43 PM AEST
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| This is a great poem especially for a beginner! I'm new at this site as well and only started writing now, but I tell you once you get the flow you're moving! |
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Re: Who Are You?
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 01:40:56 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC..This was a good write. Look forward to more of your work..
Jenni |
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Re: Who Are You?
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by Silent-No-More on
Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 10:02:46 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC, Live2Die!
I like this a lot. It's hard to explain... but... it feels sort of familiar... like - if I looked in my journal from a few years back (OK... LOL... MANY years back), I'd probably find a similar conversation with myself. For some bizarre reason, my journal seems to be filled with more questions than answers... and... I'm happy to see that it's not just me.
Great write... and not to sound cliche, but, I think I get where you're coming from.
SNM |
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Re: Who Are You?
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by Live2Die on
Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 05:06:54 PM AEST
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| hehehe thanx you guys! It came from the truth. I do not know who I am, tho my friends are helping me find out who I am. Please read my poem "If We Were Meant To Be" because I want peoples oppnoins to know if I should enter it in a contest as my teacher is practically begging me to do. Pleassseee teell mmeeee.... |
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Re: Who Are You?
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by XxdefinelifexX on
Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 01:48:43 PM AEST
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| love the poem...almost better than me...lol...actually...very much better than me...lol |
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Re: Who Are You?
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by deathdrop on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 11:01:01 AM AEST
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hey!
this one's really good!
i like the style of this poem. |
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Re: Who Are You?
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by iluvpencils on
Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 12:44:55 AM AEST
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| Love it! More great work. =) It really speaks to me...that's tough trying to figure out who you are or who someone else is. |
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