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Array ( [sid] => 67908 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Love Like Vikoden [time] => 2004-10-18 09:39:09 [hometext] => lol...whenever I am with my love, I dont care about anything but her...thats where the name came from...comments would be very awesome. not sure if I spelt vikoden right :) [bodytext] => Total joy
The feeling of being complete
Lying next to you
Under the dancing stars
I turn to you
Moonlight shining in your eyes
Crystal clear
And I feel myself melt away
Falling asleep as our lips are locked
We sleep entwined, so quiet
The suns warmth wakes me
And you, still in my arms
Is a comfort
Your sleeping eyes flutter
As dreams romance you
I dare not wake you
Though I whisper
"I love you"
My anticipation is already building
For this next night
So we can kiss the stars again [comments] => 4 [counter] => 163 [topic] => 2 [informant] => eyesxcriedxout1989 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Love Like Vikoden

Contributed by eyesxcriedxout1989 on Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 09:39:09 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Total joy
The feeling of being complete
Lying next to you
Under the dancing stars
I turn to you
Moonlight shining in your eyes
Crystal clear
And I feel myself melt away
Falling asleep as our lips are locked
We sleep entwined, so quiet
The suns warmth wakes me
And you, still in my arms
Is a comfort
Your sleeping eyes flutter
As dreams romance you
I dare not wake you
Though I whisper
"I love you"
My anticipation is already building
For this next night
So we can kiss the stars again

Copyright © eyesxcriedxout1989 ... [ 2004-10-18 09:39:09]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Love Like Vikoden (User Rating: 1 )
by FleurdeSang on Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 03:14:46 PM AEST
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This is so sweet, xeyesxcriedxoutx1989! I love it! Such a splendid flow! Very beautiful. I can tell you love your girlfriend very much! I have felt this emotion many times before. You have described it so eloquently and gracefully! You're very talented, eyesxcriedxout. Don't let anyone tell you different. I thoroughly enjoyed this masterpiece, and will visit it many times in the future! Nice job! Thank you for sharing! Much love!

Fleur de Sang

Re: Love Like Vikoden (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 09:19:48 PM AEST
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Beautiful. Simply beautiful. You are very lucky to have someone who
inspires such a lovely write.

~Breezy

Re: Love Like Vikoden (User Rating: 1 )
by theMoth on Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 07:38:16 PM AEST
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Awesome title.

Good stuff.
--Mothy

Re: Love Like Vikoden (User Rating: 1 )
by deadreckoning1983 on Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 12:15:00 AM AEST
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mothys comment was short but he meant it. mason this was a beautiful write, although how do you know about vicodin. you shouldn't know about that, and where are you and this girl staying, cause yo mama would have a cow. i am just giving you a hard time, i really loved this peice of poetry.

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