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[sid] => 68085
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[aid] => mick
[title] => GOOD BYE YOU LOT!
[time] => 2004-10-19 14:29:41
[hometext] => This is my final suicide note… This is it! Good bye every one!
[bodytext] => If it all goes to plan,
You’ll find me dead.
I can’t hang on.
This is it…
If it goes to plan,
I’ll finally die.
‘Coz this black depression,
Has left me dieing inside…
I can’t continue.
Not again.
There say they care,
And it mucks up my head.
They say I’m loved.
Don’t they under stand?
If they take away my razors,
Suicide will be at hand!
‘Coz if there’s no release,
I can’t let it stop.
And I can’t stay in depression,
So…
GOOD BYE YOU LOT!
[comments] => 10
[counter] => 213
[topic] => 36
[informant] => deathdrop
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[ihome] => 0
[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 10
[ratings] => 4
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => Suicide
)
GOOD BYE YOU LOT!
Contributed by
deathdrop
on
Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 02:29:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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If it all goes to plan,
You’ll find me dead.
I can’t hang on.
This is it…
If it goes to plan,
I’ll finally die.
‘Coz this black depression,
Has left me dieing inside…
I can’t continue.
Not again.
There say they care,
And it mucks up my head.
They say I’m loved.
Don’t they under stand?
If they take away my razors,
Suicide will be at hand!
‘Coz if there’s no release,
I can’t let it stop.
And I can’t stay in depression,
So…
GOOD BYE YOU LOT!
Copyright ©
deathdrop
... [
2004-10-19 14:29:41]
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Re: GOOD BYE YOU LOT!
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by rubytears on
Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 02:57:32 PM AEST
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if they took my razors it'd mean death to....
but try to hold on |
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Re: GOOD BYE YOU LOT!
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by Deleterious_Dislike on
Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 03:02:00 PM AEST
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Your final note, i doubt that
PM me, you need to talk to me |
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Re: GOOD BYE YOU LOT!
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by Live2Die on
Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 03:15:53 PM AEST
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| Don't kill yourself. Hang in there. My cousins best friend hung himself this summer. Shes a ***** to me now, She was so nice before. Suicide works as a chain. You die, a friend who loves you dies, then a friend who loved them dies....so on and so on. If you need to talk my IM is Sharpieworshiper, I may not know you, and I may be young, but I may also be able to help you. If you ever need to talk I am here. |
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Re: GOOD BYE YOU LOT!
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 03:59:20 PM AEST
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Bye, good luck. Better hope there is a heaven and a forgiving God. You think life here is hell? Hang on to your bootstraps, girlie, cause Hell ain't no picnic.
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Re: GOOD BYE YOU LOT!
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by theMoth on
Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 04:46:10 PM AEST
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I was just starting
to really like
you.
--Mothy |
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Re: GOOD BYE YOU LOT!
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by a_bear on
Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 05:10:19 PM AEST
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| Look you. If you leave me alone in this black hell hole.. there's no telling what I'll do. Don't do this to yourself or to us. If I can live on..you can too..come on..don't leave me alone with this lot..I get few enough reads. I'm not joking either..look at my account. 1 read on a really good poem..people hate me or something..you were reading me and now your consumed with your problems..not that I blame you..I know it's tough..I was in a booby hatch when I was your age. Sliced myself..took pills.. I thought you knew better. I was kind of dumb.. still am, sorta. |
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Re: GOOD BYE YOU LOT!
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by Chrissylee on
Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 05:17:39 PM AEST
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| i thought this was one of the worst poems you have written. no expression or passion for what you are about to do. thing is you are young and you don't think you can go through life. i don't know what you have or haven't been through but i can tell you this. If i can go through having been molested from the age of 4 and then again at the age of 8 and 14 and then raped by my own husband when i was 32 and still be alive today... then sureely the **** you can manage to survive and damn well make something of your life. Don't be a fool there are heaps of people here that care and want to help you... you'd be an idiot if you went through with it you know it and i know it as well... now take out your pen and write something decent... act it out like you actually went through with it that is how i used to deal with things... remember the pen is mightier than the sword |
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Re: GOOD BYE YOU LOT!
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by deadheadpoet on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 01:47:12 AM AEST
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| Would you quit doing this to yourself please! You are young and have a whole life ahead of you full of ups and downs. Stay strong you need to get some help. You know you need to. You are the only one who is able to make the decision what you will do with your life. Make the right decisions. I promise when your my age you will look back and think "man I'm so glad I'm here" I know I do. Take control and believe in yourself. I wish you much peace little sister. Laura |
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Re: GOOD BYE YOU LOT!
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by screwup on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 06:58:11 AM AEST
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I agree with all the people here Rosie... just pm me and talk to me... don't leave me...
~Deanna |
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Re: GOOD BYE YOU LOT!
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by willworkformilk on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 09:28:34 PM AEST
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This is a good poem, I really think so. But please don't really go through with it. I know sometimes it just feels best or like its the only way, but trust me there are other ways out. Please just find another way. If you want some help then (like almost everyone else said) you can Private Message me and I can try to help in anyway I can. Like Live2Die said, suicide is such a chain. Anywho if you just want to talk or want to try get help for anything then go ahead and PM me, I would really like to here from you! We love you! And God's always there if you want him or have nothing else left to turn to!
~Even when nobody gets you, God understands~
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