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Array ( [sid] => 68154 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Embryonic Explosive Impact [time] => 2004-10-19 23:26:02 [hometext] => Just outside the “view of sectarianism” are those who believe in love’s golden-rule minus man's religious squares… [bodytext] => Like a Time-bomb going to "explode,” people- get out of the road!
Ok, so "never say never-;" because that's just what people will do!
Friends don't see the "whole;" or the proper time to avoid you.

Talk-about-the-straw-that-broke-the-camel’s-back-!
Example.., my only, beloved cat! "No-kids, no-bliss-no-bleez..."
Still, I couldn't convey enough-, to "stay-out-of-my-way, please..."
That's right, never-say-never; because that's just what they'll do.
No one seems to care, when you're hanging-by-a-rope,
Or you’re in the air, and have reached the living-end, too-!
.
No, not friend-, nor prophet-, nor apostle as well-.
"Jesus" is the only-one-I-know who'll save you from HELL.
So, what-do-you-do, when "hell's-gate" is opened wide-?
Well, for one thing-, don't look for a saint to confide-!
I reckon it's not 'wise' to put too much confidence in a friend.
Only God has promised- to be with you, until the very end.

But this one thing I know, no Turkey-, nor dog-, nor Toad-,
Now or ever shall be-, that will ever take the place of the King.
Everyone should know- when it comes down to “the crunch,"
Only “God - delivers" and can make your heart sing….
Be that as it may, this pain has definitely brought me to You.
With tears that stream, from frustration, and a "true-heart-cry,"
From rags-to-riches, how many ways can one learned how to die?
Now I lay me down to rest-. “Upon the cross- You knew best-.”
Who could such pain-, of Your torture, piercing clear through.
Oh-, for the "Garden of Gethsemane-" to be at its final end.
To rest in sweet confidence of- "well done-, my friend."
I love You Savior, Mighty God and King; please help me now?
Of this life: “my past, present-, and future, I give and humbly bow.
Your Metaphysical Butterfly (-set-Free).”
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Embryonic Explosive Impact

Contributed by May_LilyWrite on Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 11:26:02 PM in AEST
Topic: spiritual

Like a Time-bomb going to "explode,” people- get out of the road!
Ok, so "never say never-;" because that's just what people will do!
Friends don't see the "whole;" or the proper time to avoid you.

Talk-about-the-straw-that-broke-the-camel’s-back-!
Example.., my only, beloved cat! "No-kids, no-bliss-no-bleez..."
Still, I couldn't convey enough-, to "stay-out-of-my-way, please..."
That's right, never-say-never; because that's just what they'll do.
No one seems to care, when you're hanging-by-a-rope,
Or you’re in the air, and have reached the living-end, too-!
.
No, not friend-, nor prophet-, nor apostle as well-.
"Jesus" is the only-one-I-know who'll save you from HELL.
So, what-do-you-do, when "hell's-gate" is opened wide-?
Well, for one thing-, don't look for a saint to confide-!
I reckon it's not 'wise' to put too much confidence in a friend.
Only God has promised- to be with you, until the very end.

But this one thing I know, no Turkey-, nor dog-, nor Toad-,
Now or ever shall be-, that will ever take the place of the King.
Everyone should know- when it comes down to “the crunch,"
Only “God - delivers" and can make your heart sing….
Be that as it may, this pain has definitely brought me to You.
With tears that stream, from frustration, and a "true-heart-cry,"
From rags-to-riches, how many ways can one learned how to die?
Now I lay me down to rest-. “Upon the cross- You knew best-.”
Who could such pain-, of Your torture, piercing clear through.
Oh-, for the "Garden of Gethsemane-" to be at its final end.
To rest in sweet confidence of- "well done-, my friend."
I love You Savior, Mighty God and King; please help me now?
Of this life: “my past, present-, and future, I give and humbly bow.
Your Metaphysical Butterfly (-set-Free).”

Copyright Â© May_LilyWrite ... [ 2004-10-19 23:26:02]
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Re: Embryonic Explosive Impact (User Rating: 1 )
by 2ndChance on Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 11:42:23 PM AEST
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Wow...a powerful poem...truly, blew me away...my favorite line was "Be that as it may, this pain has deffinitely brought me to You." it was touching...right down to the very end, it never stopped giving off it's amazing's poet's vibe.

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