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Array ( [sid] => 68213 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Missing Her [time] => 2004-10-20 13:48:51 [hometext] => I wrote this poem when I was sitting just a short distance away from the girl I once called my best friend. She gave me know reason why, but just didn't want to be friends anymore... with anyone... ever again. [bodytext] => Sitting in this room,
Knowing she’s over there,
Knowing I’ve lost her,
Knowing she doesn’t care.
---
Loneliness creeps into my heart,
Into my mind, in through my eyes,
A part of me’s gone,
I’m missing inside.
---
I’m aching all over,
Inside and out,
Was she really my friend…
Something I doubt.
---
My eyes don’t cry,
They only see,
She’s shutting me out,
But she’s a part of me.
---
I don’t understand,
What I’ve done wrong,
Indeed I am questioning,
Our friendship all along.
---
Every friendship has problems,
That’s true I’ll admit,
But where does she get the right,
To make me feel like s--t?
---
I’m confused, I’m befuddled,
I don’t know how I feel,
Let down, lonely,
I thought she was real.
---
Ripped out and torn up,
My heart feels no rest,
Stamped on and spat at,
My life is a mess.
---
Sitting, wondering,
If she misses me too,
Coz I miss her like anything,
I honestly do.
---
Why has she blanked me,
There are still things unsaid,
It must have been something I’ve done…
Maybe I’m better off dead…
---
I can’t help but feel responsible,
Guilty as Hell,
But I can’t ask her if I am,
Coz she won’t tell.
---
Am I being punished,
For something I’ve said or done,
One lesson I’m being taught,
Is, look after number one.
---
Live a life of solitude,
Maybe that way it’s best,
No hurt or pain from others,
Give my weary heart some rest.
---
See what happens, when I’m on my own?
Alone with just my thoughts,
My head is full of rubbish,
Just stupid, pointless, retorts. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 146 [topic] => 32 [informant] => Saz [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
Missing Her

Contributed by Saz on Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 01:48:51 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



Sitting in this room,
Knowing she’s over there,
Knowing I’ve lost her,
Knowing she doesn’t care.
---
Loneliness creeps into my heart,
Into my mind, in through my eyes,
A part of me’s gone,
I’m missing inside.
---
I’m aching all over,
Inside and out,
Was she really my friend…
Something I doubt.
---
My eyes don’t cry,
They only see,
She’s shutting me out,
But she’s a part of me.
---
I don’t understand,
What I’ve done wrong,
Indeed I am questioning,
Our friendship all along.
---
Every friendship has problems,
That’s true I’ll admit,
But where does she get the right,
To make me feel like s--t?
---
I’m confused, I’m befuddled,
I don’t know how I feel,
Let down, lonely,
I thought she was real.
---
Ripped out and torn up,
My heart feels no rest,
Stamped on and spat at,
My life is a mess.
---
Sitting, wondering,
If she misses me too,
Coz I miss her like anything,
I honestly do.
---
Why has she blanked me,
There are still things unsaid,
It must have been something I’ve done…
Maybe I’m better off dead…
---
I can’t help but feel responsible,
Guilty as Hell,
But I can’t ask her if I am,
Coz she won’t tell.
---
Am I being punished,
For something I’ve said or done,
One lesson I’m being taught,
Is, look after number one.
---
Live a life of solitude,
Maybe that way it’s best,
No hurt or pain from others,
Give my weary heart some rest.
---
See what happens, when I’m on my own?
Alone with just my thoughts,
My head is full of rubbish,
Just stupid, pointless, retorts.




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Re: Missing Her (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 01:54:57 PM AEST
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awwww this is moving, could feel your pain in your write, I hope that your pain eases for you one day soon,

takecare

pixie xx




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