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Then you’d know why I feel so blue,
You’d know that I suffer is silently,
That my depression kicks me violently.

It waits for a smile to come into my heart,
Then rips my soul totally apart,
Leaving me helpless & bleeding on the floor,
Whispering that I’ll suffer forever more.

The torment ricochets through my mind,
Leaving me stumbling as if I were blind,
I hold out my hands but no-one’s there,
So alone my pain & hurt I’ll have to bear.

I am chilled right into the depth of my bones,
Chilled at the thought of always feeling alone,
A problem shared is a problem halved,
But inside my brain my sanity is being calved.

I spend my whole life feeling cold,
I am balancing on the edge ready to unfold,
Walking on the tight rope without a safety net,
When I will finally fall is anyone’s bet.

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Feel My Pain

Contributed by pixie on Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 01:53:26 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Feel my pain, go on I want you to,
Then you’d know why I feel so blue,
You’d know that I suffer is silently,
That my depression kicks me violently.

It waits for a smile to come into my heart,
Then rips my soul totally apart,
Leaving me helpless & bleeding on the floor,
Whispering that I’ll suffer forever more.

The torment ricochets through my mind,
Leaving me stumbling as if I were blind,
I hold out my hands but no-one’s there,
So alone my pain & hurt I’ll have to bear.

I am chilled right into the depth of my bones,
Chilled at the thought of always feeling alone,
A problem shared is a problem halved,
But inside my brain my sanity is being calved.

I spend my whole life feeling cold,
I am balancing on the edge ready to unfold,
Walking on the tight rope without a safety net,
When I will finally fall is anyone’s bet.

Copyright Â© pixie ... [ 2004-10-20 13:53:26]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Feel My Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by Kazzy1231 on Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 02:41:18 PM AEST
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Great poem,Thanks for commenting on some of mine!

Re: Feel My Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 03:13:35 PM AEST
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I feel the despair in this write. Keep fighting, never give up or give in.

Very well done
Roses
Larry

Re: Feel My Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by Deleterious_Dislike on Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 04:11:46 PM AEST
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How you manage to create so many poem in this style, baffles me.
Although I find reading quite a few of yours in a row become
quite repeatitive (ignoring the content, a lot of it is very deep and true Im sure)
But non the less, you are a poet.
And you do it well.

5 out of 5

Re: Feel My Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 11:08:16 PM AEST
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So Much agony, and tears, dont give up on the fight, You are to beautiful for that, with a mind full of wonder, and feelings to match.
Awesome poem, showing much grief, and horror.

Re: Feel My Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by bleedinheart on Thursday, 4th November 2010 @ 09:34:50 AM AEST
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i like this your a good writer i could the pain

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