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Array ( [sid] => 68256 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Listen:love you [time] => 2004-10-20 17:34:19 [hometext] => I havent written a poem in a while so i just decided i just had to sit down and write this...i didn't have much time but i think it's still ok [bodytext] => You're always pushing me away
You don't give me a chance to speak my mind
Can't you see i love you
Sometimes it seems you're completely blind

I try to show you how much i care
I try to be by your side
But you don't even seem to notice me
Would you even care if I died?

I want to be your friend again
I want you to love me too
But you suddenly seem to hate me
And i dont know what to do

I tried telling you I'm sorry
Although I'm not quite sure what I've done
Won't you please forgive me
You're my star, my moon, and my sun

Don't leave me here waiting
I don't know if I can last
Can't you just come back to me?
Can we just forget the past?

I know for sure you love me
You told me once before
Let's walk again in clasped hands
My lost love

[comments] => 2 [counter] => 211 [topic] => 22 [informant] => allymp [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Listen:love you

Contributed by allymp on Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 05:34:19 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



You're always pushing me away
You don't give me a chance to speak my mind
Can't you see i love you
Sometimes it seems you're completely blind

I try to show you how much i care
I try to be by your side
But you don't even seem to notice me
Would you even care if I died?

I want to be your friend again
I want you to love me too
But you suddenly seem to hate me
And i dont know what to do

I tried telling you I'm sorry
Although I'm not quite sure what I've done
Won't you please forgive me
You're my star, my moon, and my sun

Don't leave me here waiting
I don't know if I can last
Can't you just come back to me?
Can we just forget the past?

I know for sure you love me
You told me once before
Let's walk again in clasped hands
My lost love





Copyright © allymp ... [ 2004-10-20 17:34:19]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Listen:love you (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 09:01:29 PM AEST
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Great write. I can relate.


Re: Listen:love you (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 03:51:31 PM AEST
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I think love is trying to control. Be yourself you don't need to plead wtih onyone.What ever will be will be.I can relate to how you may feel as I was once young an had Love walk out on me.
Very well expressed.
Sinned




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