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Array ( [sid] => 68320 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => my little heart [time] => 2004-10-21 08:01:37 [hometext] => take and break my little heart... [bodytext] => Talk to me when I am low,
hold me close and let me know,
pray for me when I am weak,
It is your love I seek.

Write my wrongs when you see,
tell me what you want me to be,
show me how to let you in,
I want you to be under my skin.

Wipe my tears when I cry,
don't let my spirits die,
cling to me as I fall,
here my voice when I call.

I knew it was meant from the start,
so I took out my little heart,
gave it to you on a plate,
God, this must be my fate...



Tear me down when i'm high,
kill me inside with your lies,
hurt me when i'm vulnerable,
make me totally breakable.

Spit on me when I hurt,
throw me down into the dirt,
smack my face when I talk,
kick me back down as I try to walk.

Take whatever you want from me,
sheild the truth so I can't see,
show me nothing but your hate,
this is my destined fate.

Break my boby down for years,
call upon all my fears,
make me dependant on you,
so I don't know what else to do.

Is this what you thought I said,
that night we lay awake in bed,
and I confessed my deep infatuation,
did you really see my desperation?

I wanted so badly to be in love,
I thought you must've been sent from above,
but now I know you planned it from the start,
to take and break my little heart.









[comments] => 4 [counter] => 166 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Rxqueen [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
my little heart

Contributed by Rxqueen on Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 08:01:37 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Talk to me when I am low,
hold me close and let me know,
pray for me when I am weak,
It is your love I seek.

Write my wrongs when you see,
tell me what you want me to be,
show me how to let you in,
I want you to be under my skin.

Wipe my tears when I cry,
don't let my spirits die,
cling to me as I fall,
here my voice when I call.

I knew it was meant from the start,
so I took out my little heart,
gave it to you on a plate,
God, this must be my fate...



Tear me down when i'm high,
kill me inside with your lies,
hurt me when i'm vulnerable,
make me totally breakable.

Spit on me when I hurt,
throw me down into the dirt,
smack my face when I talk,
kick me back down as I try to walk.

Take whatever you want from me,
sheild the truth so I can't see,
show me nothing but your hate,
this is my destined fate.

Break my boby down for years,
call upon all my fears,
make me dependant on you,
so I don't know what else to do.

Is this what you thought I said,
that night we lay awake in bed,
and I confessed my deep infatuation,
did you really see my desperation?

I wanted so badly to be in love,
I thought you must've been sent from above,
but now I know you planned it from the start,
to take and break my little heart.













Copyright © Rxqueen ... [ 2004-10-21 08:01:37]
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Re: my little heart (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 09:10:39 AM AEST
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an emotional and sad write, well expressed,

pixie xx


Re: my little heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 03:24:15 PM AEST
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A lot of words, a lot of emotion
Thanks for sharing this with all of us

Steve


Re: my little heart (User Rating: 1 )
by UnlovedChild on Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 08:51:03 PM AEST
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Aww ... great write. Your heart isnt little it is big and full of love with everyone you care about inside! You're in m heart!


Re: my little heart (User Rating: 1 )
by deadreckoning1983 on Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 12:37:47 AM AEST
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A great poem by, may i add, a great poetess. i really like how you think and write, and thanks for the comment on one of my poems. any ments i get are very welcome.
peace and love,

DR




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