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It will send you crying with pain. She cheats on you, you stay straight and she keeps on a lying.
She makes you feel good right before she says "we weren't meant for each other."
Then you walk away with nothing more then a wounded heart beat, stabbed and bleeding fearlesly.
Looking around now shoulder to cry on, nore a friend to lean on.

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Love Bites

Contributed by chaos_wizard on Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 06:53:40 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Love bites when you least except it love will come up and bite you in the ass.
It will send you crying with pain. She cheats on you, you stay straight and she keeps on a lying.
She makes you feel good right before she says "we weren't meant for each other."
Then you walk away with nothing more then a wounded heart beat, stabbed and bleeding fearlesly.
Looking around now shoulder to cry on, nore a friend to lean on.

Yes Because Love Bites!!!!!!!!

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Re: Love Bites (User Rating: 1 )
by girish on Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 08:34:13 PM AEST
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may be love bites but i am going to really bite you

Re: Love Bites (User Rating: 1 )
by greeneyes on Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 09:44:35 PM AEST
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Ouch, this poem bites, very good, right to the point.

Nancy

Re: Love Bites (User Rating: 1 )
by Stoney1 on Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 07:28:12 AM AEST
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The whole effort reeks of carelessness.

Love bites when you least ex{-p}{-c}e{+c}{-p}t it
love will come up and bite you in the ass.
It will send you crying with pain
She cheats on you, you stay straight
and she keeps on {-a} lying
She makes you feel good
right before she says{+,} "{+W}{-w}e weren't meant for each other."
Then you walk away with nothing more
th{+a}{-e}n a wounded heartbeat, stabbed and bleeding fearles{+s}ly
Looking around{+,} no{-w} shoulder to cry on,
nor{-e} a friend to lean on.

Yes{+,} {-B}{+be}cause {-L}{+l}ove {-B}{+b}ites!{-!!!!!!!}

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Love bites when you least expect it
love will come up and bite you in the ass
It will send you crying with pain
She cheats on you, you stay straight
and she keeps on lying
She makes you feel good
right before she says,"We weren't meant for each other."
Then you walk away with nothing more
than a wounded heartbeat, stabbed and bleeding fearlessly
Looking around, no shoulder to cry on,
nor a friend to lean on.

Yes, because love bites!

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