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And turn to pearls as they hit the ground,
Filling up my ocean of dreams;
Soon it will be full,
And I will be free to leave this wretched place
And live among the living yet again

And as the garnet sky
And amethyst moon,
Fly overhead,
I remember how I was
And will be again some day [comments] => 7 [counter] => 204 [topic] => 42 [informant] => TheVampireClaudia [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 6 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => mythology )

Tears for the Living

Contributed by TheVampireClaudia on Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 11:26:22 AM in AEST
Topic: mythology

The tears fall from my eyes,
And turn to pearls as they hit the ground,
Filling up my ocean of dreams;
Soon it will be full,
And I will be free to leave this wretched place
And live among the living yet again

And as the garnet sky
And amethyst moon,
Fly overhead,
I remember how I was
And will be again some day

Copyright © TheVampireClaudia ... [ 2004-10-24 11:26:22]
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Re: Tears for the Living (User Rating: 1 )
by macmcgovern on Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 01:07:54 PM AEST
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I'd say, from a very well eductated 13 year old. Keep writing like this and your future will be bright indeed. This is extremely well done and creative . I throughly enjoyed reading and look forward to reading future creations. Thanks for sharing.

Mac

Re: Tears for the Living (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 01:11:51 PM AEST
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*agrees with mac*

yes, very well written. I love the metaphors you chose.
Keep it up, you've got talent!

~Breezy

Re: Tears for the Living (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 01:56:04 PM AEST
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beautifully written:) hugs n' love nessa

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Re: Tears for the Living (User Rating: 1 )
by footiebabe on Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 02:08:21 PM AEST
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Beautiful I love the amethyst moon stanza, very descriptive.

luv michelle

Re: Tears for the Living (User Rating: 1 )
by immortal_pain on Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 02:23:14 PM AEST
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very good ^_^ I liked it. if you ever need help just IM

Re: Tears for the Living (User Rating: 1 )
by Apardame on Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 06:11:12 PM AEST
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This is a very good poem. From the way you write, it doesn't seem like your 13 years old. Keep up the good work!!!

Re: Tears for the Living (User Rating: 1 )
by travisk on Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 08:21:26 PM AEST
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could feel the effort in it, but well done. The best stuff comes naturally.

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