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Array ( [sid] => 6868 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Secret [time] => 2002-11-17 12:00:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Tell me, what’s your secret?
What’s the reason to your world?
The smiles are all back again now
The lines on your face are unfurled

The fire in your eyes is bright now
The ice in your heart melted away
Now you sing a different tune
What’s happened to you today?

I can sixth sense the change in you
I feel it in my heart
Emotions in a sideways glance
But when’s the rain going to start?

I know that you won’t tell me
If I asked, you’d tell me to go
So I’ve come to the conclusion
That I probably already know

Memories are a painful thing
You build a wall so you can hide
But don’t you ever wonder
What’s happening on the other side?

Confide in me if you want to
I’d feel better if I knew
If it was all out in the open
I’m sure you would feel better too

So tell me, what’s your secret?
What’s so private you’d never say?
Your happiness means everything
I want to share it if I may
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Secret

Contributed by ben on Sunday, 17th November 2002 @ 12:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Tell me, what’s your secret?
What’s the reason to your world?
The smiles are all back again now
The lines on your face are unfurled

The fire in your eyes is bright now
The ice in your heart melted away
Now you sing a different tune
What’s happened to you today?

I can sixth sense the change in you
I feel it in my heart
Emotions in a sideways glance
But when’s the rain going to start?

I know that you won’t tell me
If I asked, you’d tell me to go
So I’ve come to the conclusion
That I probably already know

Memories are a painful thing
You build a wall so you can hide
But don’t you ever wonder
What’s happening on the other side?

Confide in me if you want to
I’d feel better if I knew
If it was all out in the open
I’m sure you would feel better too

So tell me, what’s your secret?
What’s so private you’d never say?
Your happiness means everything
I want to share it if I may

Copyright Â© ben ... [ 2002-11-17 12:00:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Secret (User Rating: 1 )
by TiNyOnE on Sunday, 17th November 2002 @ 01:47:18 PM AEST
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i love this poem... i think its beautiful... it almost brought me to tears... b/c i tend to hide myself from people because i've been hurt be4 and i dont like to open up... your poem was so sweet and nice... and just goes to show you never know whos out there... wanting your happiness... thank you so much for a great poem...
keep up the good work..
Tiny

Re: Secret (User Rating: 1 )
by viola on Sunday, 17th November 2002 @ 02:17:30 PM AEST
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This is great, you know what they say about the cat and curiosity. Do you really want to know what's making her change?

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