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Array ( [sid] => 68764 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Lose (I'm Human) [time] => 2004-10-25 04:05:50 [hometext] => [bodytext] => take my pile of dirt
and make it clean
take my mess and
make it yours
I stand on the crying edge
and I can't see
what good that I can do
any way
so let me die
let me be in peace
I don't stand a chance
living here
oh no
I will lose again
and the pain follows me
and when the time comes
I know I'll lose
my resolution
so what use there
I can't make it fair
so what good is there
for me to live
you must take my life
make it yours
because in my hands
something good
just turns sand
I make love goodbye
I leave fun for pain
I drop good for gone
and leave me insane
Oh what good is there
when I can't be
when I can't be
true [comments] => 4 [counter] => 168 [topic] => 62 [informant] => NickNamed [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => spiritual )

I Lose (I'm Human)

Contributed by NickNamed on Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 04:05:50 AM in AEST
Topic: spiritual

take my pile of dirt
and make it clean
take my mess and
make it yours
I stand on the crying edge
and I can't see
what good that I can do
any way
so let me die
let me be in peace
I don't stand a chance
living here
oh no
I will lose again
and the pain follows me
and when the time comes
I know I'll lose
my resolution
so what use there
I can't make it fair
so what good is there
for me to live
you must take my life
make it yours
because in my hands
something good
just turns sand
I make love goodbye
I leave fun for pain
I drop good for gone
and leave me insane
Oh what good is there
when I can't be
when I can't be
true

Copyright © NickNamed ... [ 2004-10-25 04:05:50]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: I Lose (I'm Human) (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 04:37:31 AM AEST
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I like this one, there's a lot of emotion in these words, I suppose there is always a reason for living, we just have to find it.

Take Care
- Becca

Re: I Lose (I'm Human) (User Rating: 1 )
by little_genna on Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 04:57:27 AM AEST
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I really feel this poem. It holds alot of emotion of someone lost in life. I know I am lost in life. Keep writing this is good.

Peace be with you
Gen xx

Re: I Lose (I'm Human) (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 07:56:44 AM AEST
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This is good...honest, raw, exploring a place few dare to go.
Stitch

Re: I Lose (I'm Human) (User Rating: 1 )
by girish on Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 08:31:56 AM AEST
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if these be your real emotions i am very pathetic about it see / read my poems your attitude is defenite to change

i have written poems on making possibilities of situations. i have made possible many a things with all my disabilities. i had a grave accident a death cum survival. now i am a B.com MBA GNIIT. my teachers felt even if i would cross my 7th standard when i had the grave accident in my 6th standard.

if your feelings are real my poems are your answer

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