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Array ( [sid] => 68861 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Too Good To Be True [time] => 2004-10-25 21:16:01 [hometext] => [bodytext] => It hurts to find that our love is conditional.
I never took you to be so superficial.

When you said "I love you." I didn't think it was a lie.
Now that I know the truth, I feel like I could die.

Now I don't know what to do, don't know what to say.
You're the only one who could make me feel this way.

I was never happier than when I was with you.
I guess I should've known it was too good to be true. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 156 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Elf [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Too Good To Be True

Contributed by Elf on Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 09:16:01 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

It hurts to find that our love is conditional.
I never took you to be so superficial.

When you said "I love you." I didn't think it was a lie.
Now that I know the truth, I feel like I could die.

Now I don't know what to do, don't know what to say.
You're the only one who could make me feel this way.

I was never happier than when I was with you.
I guess I should've known it was too good to be true.

Copyright © Elf ... [ 2004-10-25 21:16:01]
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Re: Too Good To Be True (User Rating: 1 )
by Delusions on Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 09:23:19 PM AEST
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awsome poem... short and to the point... reflects a situation im sure many have been thorugh... including me... which is what makes this hit so close to home! Keep it up ~Delusions~

Re: Too Good To Be True (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 10:17:49 PM AEST
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this is a great expression on how you feel and worded very well.. We all have gone through this .. think of it this way if the person left you and lied then they weren't worth it in the first place there is someone better for you never give up hope cuz there is always hope

Peace and hope
Jenna

Re: Too Good To Be True (User Rating: 1 )
by lanna047 on Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 11:42:23 PM AEST
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I like it ... I too can relate to what you've written. Nicely put.

Re: Too Good To Be True (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 07:43:57 AM AEST
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Cute poem. The words are very true as to how some ppl are.........Mike

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