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Array ( [sid] => 68864 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => ending [time] => 2004-10-25 21:24:58 [hometext] => plz read and comment [bodytext] => time is my memories
of everyday that i have walked
upon this earth
with all my tragedies
and my happiness
the fun i've had
with all my friends
the love i dream to feel
with all i lack
to have done
but i've done more
than most ever dream
but yet my heart seems crushed
away and gone
i've resorted to all the things
that a man should never do
just to feel happy
but yet my true happiness
has yet to come
and my heart still lies crushed
on the sands of beaches
forever gone
and so the man
that i once was
shall never be
for he is gone
with all his purity [comments] => 4 [counter] => 218 [topic] => 32 [informant] => marsh62287 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

ending

Contributed by marsh62287 on Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 09:24:58 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

time is my memories
of everyday that i have walked
upon this earth
with all my tragedies
and my happiness
the fun i've had
with all my friends
the love i dream to feel
with all i lack
to have done
but i've done more
than most ever dream
but yet my heart seems crushed
away and gone
i've resorted to all the things
that a man should never do
just to feel happy
but yet my true happiness
has yet to come
and my heart still lies crushed
on the sands of beaches
forever gone
and so the man
that i once was
shall never be
for he is gone
with all his purity

Copyright © marsh62287 ... [ 2004-10-25 21:24:58]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: ending (User Rating: 1 )
by girlg0newrong on Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 09:28:58 PM AEST
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great expression of how you feel. Wonderful write. :)

Re: ending (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 10:01:18 PM AEST
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excellent write. very powerful.

Re: ending (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 10:15:56 PM AEST
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wow this is a very powerful write.. don't feel bad you can always become a good person by learning from mistakes.. there is always hope and awesome write

peace and hope
Jenna

Re: ending (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Friday, 16th May 2008 @ 01:49:20 PM AEST
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Wow...this reminds me so much of my post, "She is no more" I hope things have changed for you....
Jenni

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