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Array ( [sid] => 68977 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => untitled [time] => 2004-10-26 19:46:01 [hometext] => urm i couldnt think of a title for this [bodytext] => Trying to hold my head up high.
Not noticing everyone laughin and pointing.
Just sailing by..
Why am i so hated? why am i so unloved?
I hate all this i just want to die!!!!!!!!
So then id be able to fly..
No-one will notice me gone
No-one will cry..
I was just a big mistake
Not destined to be..
So i'm just gonna get this knife.....
And be free!!!!
Clenchin my fist.Stabbing the knife deep into my skin....
Blood pours out.........Now i guess you win??????
I fall to the floor motionless.bleeding
Everythings slowly going away........
Do not try and save me
Cos i no longer wanna stay!!!!!!!!!! [comments] => 3 [counter] => 236 [topic] => 36 [informant] => TornApart [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

untitled

Contributed by TornApart on Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 07:46:01 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Trying to hold my head up high.
Not noticing everyone laughin and pointing.
Just sailing by..
Why am i so hated? why am i so unloved?
I hate all this i just want to die!!!!!!!!
So then id be able to fly..
No-one will notice me gone
No-one will cry..
I was just a big mistake
Not destined to be..
So i'm just gonna get this knife.....
And be free!!!!
Clenchin my fist.Stabbing the knife deep into my skin....
Blood pours out.........Now i guess you win??????
I fall to the floor motionless.bleeding
Everythings slowly going away........
Do not try and save me
Cos i no longer wanna stay!!!!!!!!!!

Copyright © TornApart ... [ 2004-10-26 19:46:01]
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Re: untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by Evilnn on Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 09:11:32 PM AEST
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Very powerful poem, I can relate very much.
But we have to be strong, people like you and I. I hope writing this poem somehow gives you some release of emotion and maybe even feel better through the tears.

I hope you are okay
PLEASE STAY!!!!!

Re: untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by Clarity_Rising on Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 12:11:24 AM AEST
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Your inner cries of pain are unleashed. That was a creative twist to the suicidal scene.

Re: untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by BuTTerFly_LoVe on Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 01:44:44 PM AEST
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ouch very powerful poem... AMazing write i totally felt like this was happening to me... Great job, i just hope you really don't feel that way because i don't think anyone should feel that hate and unloved... You'll always be loved and never hated by all.. Keep up the great work..

~UnKnOwN BUtTErfLY~

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