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[sid] => 6899
[catid] => 1
[aid] => Mick
[title] => Alone
[time] => 2002-11-17 23:30:00
[hometext] => About somebody who left.
[bodytext] => I thought you hand would forever guide me.
but you pulled your hand away and now I'm stumbling in the darkness with nowhere to go. I wish I had something that could show me the way. I guess now all I have is myself, hitting walls and falling down on the way, but it's okay because I'm all alone and you couldn't care less. If you saw me you would laugh because now I'm weak and I have no place to go. You're face would light up to see the pain you've put me through, the anguish you've caused me. But I'm still breathing, maybe not for much longer, but I am for now. Even though every breath I take pulls me further, I'm still breathing. But all I know that in death I'll find comfort, forever alone, bruised and bleeding.
[comments] => 5
[counter] => 530
[topic] => 36
[informant] => LayDownPlayDead
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[ihome] => 0
[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 5
[ratings] => 1
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => Suicide
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Alone
Contributed by
LayDownPlayDead
on
Sunday, 17th November 2002 @ 11:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I thought you hand would forever guide me.
but you pulled your hand away and now I'm stumbling in the darkness with nowhere to go. I wish I had something that could show me the way. I guess now all I have is myself, hitting walls and falling down on the way, but it's okay because I'm all alone and you couldn't care less. If you saw me you would laugh because now I'm weak and I have no place to go. You're face would light up to see the pain you've put me through, the anguish you've caused me. But I'm still breathing, maybe not for much longer, but I am for now. Even though every breath I take pulls me further, I'm still breathing. But all I know that in death I'll find comfort, forever alone, bruised and bleeding.
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Re: Alone
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by wyrd_faerie on
Monday, 18th November 2002 @ 06:35:48 AM AEST
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| that is so true, beautifully written, well done |
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Re: Alone
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by frozensuicide on
Monday, 18th November 2002 @ 11:03:19 AM AEST
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i liiiiiike alot!
hug a moose! |
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Re: Alone
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by Rakerman1999 on
Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 11:58:31 AM AEST
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| Keep fighting! Never give up or give in. Another great one! :o) |
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Re: Alone
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by MnMnMsrcool on
Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 07:07:41 AM AEST
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| Wow thats a good write. alot of people will say they love u then make you fall down in the dirt good job keep writin |
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Re: Alone
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by OreO on
Tuesday, 31st December 2002 @ 05:54:41 PM AEST
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This one takes me back in time to a relationship i had that left me feeling this way, it was the darkest time in my life that i have ever had.....and it was the last...i thank you for sharing this one it's very sad...and it hurts real deep when people disregard one's feelings like this....
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