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Array ( [sid] => 69050 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Feel like givin' up [time] => 2004-10-27 10:08:50 [hometext] => don't feel good enough [bodytext] => Feel like givin up
Don't feel good enough
I don't understand
I can't pretend
That everything is okay,
it's not, not in any way
I have made too many mistakes
These feelings way too much for me to take
I want to feel love
I want to be accepted
But my faults do not go undetected
They are burned onto my soul, it's taken my life, and spun out of control
I'll never be free
I'll never be me
I'll never be who I'm supposed to be
I'll forever be a prisioner of my own land
I'll always fall each time I stand
This hell I've created
In a prison cell of isolation
complete with confusion and frustration
These gaurds that watch this cell
are my very own demons straight from hell
There's
Guilt, Fear, Shame, Doubt
and they are just some I know about
I've heard there are more that gaurd these doors
But I don't want to live here anymore
someone set me free
someone rescue me
I don't want to dwell
In my self-made hell [comments] => 5 [counter] => 167 [topic] => 61 [informant] => lovesucks [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )
Feel like givin' up

Contributed by lovesucks on Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 10:08:50 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles



Feel like givin up
Don't feel good enough
I don't understand
I can't pretend
That everything is okay,
it's not, not in any way
I have made too many mistakes
These feelings way too much for me to take
I want to feel love
I want to be accepted
But my faults do not go undetected
They are burned onto my soul, it's taken my life, and spun out of control
I'll never be free
I'll never be me
I'll never be who I'm supposed to be
I'll forever be a prisioner of my own land
I'll always fall each time I stand
This hell I've created
In a prison cell of isolation
complete with confusion and frustration
These gaurds that watch this cell
are my very own demons straight from hell
There's
Guilt, Fear, Shame, Doubt
and they are just some I know about
I've heard there are more that gaurd these doors
But I don't want to live here anymore
someone set me free
someone rescue me
I don't want to dwell
In my self-made hell




Copyright © lovesucks ... [ 2004-10-27 10:08:50]
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Re: Feel like givin' up (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 10:13:28 AM AEST
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wow, you must have been reading my thoughts when you write this poem, I am sorry you don't feel good enough, but you should do, because you are good enough.

very expressive write of emotions,

*hugs*

pixie xx


Re: Feel like givin' up (User Rating: 1 )
by Dawny on Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 12:06:23 PM AEST
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Don't ever give up, not ever. If you do all those people who doubted you, and were cruel will be right. Don't give them the satisfaction...prove them wrong.

This is a road I know well

Love Dawny xxx


Re: Feel like givin' up (User Rating: 1 )
by Bruce on Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 12:28:11 AM AEST
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get up ,get out ,it might not seem easy, but it really is. you are the one who has to want it more than anything, and tell this to yourself every minute of your life and you will do it.fight, fight, fight and you will lick the feeling and be the happy person you want to be. GOOD LUCK and never give up.


Re: Feel like givin' up (User Rating: 1 )
by Catalina on Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 10:35:07 AM AEST
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Written very well! Hope things are better now. Our perspective is what drives us to excel or condem ourselves to hell.
I love you.
~Catalina~


Re: Feel like givin' up (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 06:53:13 AM AEST
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I really hope things are better now




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