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Array ( [sid] => 69562 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => To Respond [time] => 2004-10-31 14:07:55 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Sometimes I have to admit I have doubts about you
Not because of anything you specifically do
It is due to my past and the way I have been treated
And it's hard to believe you are all that I have needed

I know it's not fair to always expect the worst
I know if I have a problem I need to come to you first
And not jump to a conclusion that is so far from true
I just want you to understand this is all me, and not you

I will learn to get over my past hurts and pain
And I will learn to trust someone completely again
Until then thank you for being patience with me
You proove to me that you are someone I want to see

I will learn to respond to you and not just react
And I will not go based on feelings and instead go on fact
I am blessed by the person that you are becoming in my life
And one day I will fully open up and let go of my past strife

Copyright© Renee October 31 2004 [comments] => 1 [counter] => 169 [topic] => 21 [informant] => Starlilly [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

To Respond

Contributed by Starlilly on Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 02:07:55 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Sometimes I have to admit I have doubts about you
Not because of anything you specifically do
It is due to my past and the way I have been treated
And it's hard to believe you are all that I have needed

I know it's not fair to always expect the worst
I know if I have a problem I need to come to you first
And not jump to a conclusion that is so far from true
I just want you to understand this is all me, and not you

I will learn to get over my past hurts and pain
And I will learn to trust someone completely again
Until then thank you for being patience with me
You proove to me that you are someone I want to see

I will learn to respond to you and not just react
And I will not go based on feelings and instead go on fact
I am blessed by the person that you are becoming in my life
And one day I will fully open up and let go of my past strife

Copyright© Renee October 31 2004

Copyright Â© Starlilly ... [ 2004-10-31 14:07:55]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: To Respond (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 10:53:37 PM AEST
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i loved this. im living it right now.

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