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ThE UnKnOwN
Contributed by
Butterfly_love
on
Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 02:55:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Hatred is known
Its in my soul
Looks can be deceiving
My intentions are never mistaken
Death goes on
Take it as it comes
For all you know tomorrow will pass away
And youre existence will no longer be around
Taken away from the world
People come and go
But the best has yet to be known
Tired of caring
Fearing
Bearing the unbearable
Breaking the ice of confusion
Cant take the heat
To be hated is harsh and cold
Hate is such a strong word
So let it be known
Im unknown to all
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Butterfly_love
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2004-11-01 14:55:41]
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Re: ThE UnKnOwN
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by Yousef on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 06:13:19 PM AEST
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I liked this poem, eventhough I don't like this type of poems (It's so depressing), anyway well written and I really liked the part saying
"Tired of caring
Fearing
Bearing the unbearable "
Being lonely is hard, becasue people are meant to live together, share joys and pains together, so when someone doesn't find anyone to share these joys and pains with, they became "Loners"!! |
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