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Array ( [sid] => 69710 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A Lost Love [time] => 2004-11-01 15:55:10 [hometext] => also written when i was 13, its alright, not as much effort into this one as [bodytext] => I love you with all my heart,
i lay here,
staring into the darkness,
thinking of when you loved me,
when we loved each other,
but those days are gone now...

i have lost your love,
just the chance of your loves redemption is what drives me forward,
the hope to be held by you one more time,
to hear the voice,
to feel your lips on mine,
to look into your eyes,
and feel what i used to...

to be truly happy,
is to be with you,
my love...

for now you are lost,
but i can always search,
for that love,
that once deferred me,
that once assured i had some meaning,
but that love is lost at sea,
i am a lonely sailor searching for the now buried treasure...

your love. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 172 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Novocane [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

A Lost Love

Contributed by Novocane on Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 03:55:10 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I love you with all my heart,
i lay here,
staring into the darkness,
thinking of when you loved me,
when we loved each other,
but those days are gone now...

i have lost your love,
just the chance of your loves redemption is what drives me forward,
the hope to be held by you one more time,
to hear the voice,
to feel your lips on mine,
to look into your eyes,
and feel what i used to...

to be truly happy,
is to be with you,
my love...

for now you are lost,
but i can always search,
for that love,
that once deferred me,
that once assured i had some meaning,
but that love is lost at sea,
i am a lonely sailor searching for the now buried treasure...

your love.

Copyright © Novocane ... [ 2004-11-01 15:55:10]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: A Lost Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Dizza_13 on Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 04:02:55 PM AEST
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a touching write. I can relate to this well. keep em
coming

dizza

Re: A Lost Love (User Rating: 1 )
by eyesxcriedxout1989 on Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 04:10:23 PM AEST
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This was a very beautiful piece

Mason

Re: A Lost Love (User Rating: 1 )
by veenu on Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 07:41:11 AM AEST
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lost love is great chase i fear from that cause i too go through it in previous month........................it just shattered me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!well its a good write

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