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Array ( [sid] => 69897 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Take This Pain Away [time] => 2004-11-02 20:30:34 [hometext] => [bodytext] => No one can take this pain away
No one but me, myself & I

No one can tell me not to
It's my personal decision

Nothing's gone right for me
From my first day on Earth

Meeting people
To have them back away

Leaving me alone
In my darkened, lonely room

Here, the blood flows
Not from cuts or bruises

From my heart down to my feet
I feel myself growing weak

Take me to perfection
Out of this world of reality

Reality is a ruthless foe
Fantasy is my friend

Where love always exsist
& I'll never forget you, my friend [comments] => 5 [counter] => 204 [topic] => 13 [informant] => RhythmBndt [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 19 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Take This Pain Away

Contributed by RhythmBndt on Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 08:30:34 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

No one can take this pain away
No one but me, myself & I

No one can tell me not to
It's my personal decision

Nothing's gone right for me
From my first day on Earth

Meeting people
To have them back away

Leaving me alone
In my darkened, lonely room

Here, the blood flows
Not from cuts or bruises

From my heart down to my feet
I feel myself growing weak

Take me to perfection
Out of this world of reality

Reality is a ruthless foe
Fantasy is my friend

Where love always exsist
& I'll never forget you, my friend

Copyright © RhythmBndt ... [ 2004-11-02 20:30:34]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Take This Pain Away (User Rating: 1 )
by jade01 on Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 08:37:37 PM AEST
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Good poem!!

Re: Take This Pain Away (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 09:05:02 PM AEST
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good write. =]

Re: Take This Pain Away (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 06:52:03 AM AEST
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well expressed dark write, I wish I could take your pain away *hugs*

takecare
pixie xx

Re: Take This Pain Away (User Rating: 1 )
by Red_October on Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 11:52:32 AM AEST
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"Here, the blood flows
Not from cuts or bruises
From my heart down to my feet
I feel myself growing weak"

I really like this stanza the best. The whole poem flows well. Nice write. Tiffany J. (Red_October)

Re: Take This Pain Away (User Rating: 1 )
by thumper on Tuesday, 28th August 2007 @ 11:46:31 PM AEST
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Wow. This is spoken by a truely lonely person. I feel this way all the time.
My heart goes out to you. I hope someday you find happiness.
Good write. Keep it up. Hope to read more.
Peace to you
Thumper :o)

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