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Array ( [sid] => 69904 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Greatest Inspiration ( Even In Death ) [time] => 2004-11-02 21:15:51 [hometext] => a work of fiction but the emotions in it is still real [bodytext] => I sit and watch the rain

Cascading from an overacting sky of leaves

And see it form a silhouette

Over the roses and lavender

Of my garden made of dreams

The drops of rain come together splendidly

Mixing with my memories just to

Form an image of you dancing gracefully

In front of stage of greens and violets and reds

Under a horizon of pinks, oranges and golden shades

So beautiful is the imagery that I see

That I begin to cry and remember the way

That I had you and how you had me

We where more than perfect

Even in our times of misery

When you felt sad and tried to keep it from me

But I always could see through it all

And would not let you stay that way

I could not stand to see you cry

Opening my wounds with every tear

And I was wounded many times and still

I possess the scars from the last

You may have crossed over that night

But I am the one who died

Now I am just a ghost who breaths

Looking for my angel who was

The cause of the saddest day in my

In my life of tragedy

I remember holding you there

Wet and lifeless in my arms

The evidence of your strife was all around me

But I still tried to bring you back

Why did you have to take your life?

And why did you have to take mine?

I have never been the same

I have never loved anyone the same

No matter how much you may want me to

I have ever painted the same way or written

It’s all just dark and bitter beauty

That captivates the minds eye

Even in death you are

My greatest inspiration

If you read this

You can tell
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My Greatest Inspiration ( Even In Death )

Contributed by Doriens_Picture on Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 09:15:51 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



I sit and watch the rain

Cascading from an overacting sky of leaves

And see it form a silhouette

Over the roses and lavender

Of my garden made of dreams

The drops of rain come together splendidly

Mixing with my memories just to

Form an image of you dancing gracefully

In front of stage of greens and violets and reds

Under a horizon of pinks, oranges and golden shades

So beautiful is the imagery that I see

That I begin to cry and remember the way

That I had you and how you had me

We where more than perfect

Even in our times of misery

When you felt sad and tried to keep it from me

But I always could see through it all

And would not let you stay that way

I could not stand to see you cry

Opening my wounds with every tear

And I was wounded many times and still

I possess the scars from the last

You may have crossed over that night

But I am the one who died

Now I am just a ghost who breaths

Looking for my angel who was

The cause of the saddest day in my

In my life of tragedy

I remember holding you there

Wet and lifeless in my arms

The evidence of your strife was all around me

But I still tried to bring you back

Why did you have to take your life?

And why did you have to take mine?

I have never been the same

I have never loved anyone the same

No matter how much you may want me to

I have ever painted the same way or written

It’s all just dark and bitter beauty

That captivates the minds eye

Even in death you are

My greatest inspiration

If you read this

You can tell




Copyright © Doriens_Picture ... [ 2004-11-02 21:15:51]
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Re: My Greatest Inspiration ( Even In Death ) (User Rating: 1 )
by mylastwords on Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 11:26:57 PM AEST
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hey...i really like this one...i felt it...its really beautiful...keep writing...

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Re: My Greatest Inspiration ( Even In Death ) (User Rating: 1 )
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beautiful imagery


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