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What the future held for us was still left to be seen.
Throughout the years close friends we became,
Seemed our wants and our needs would always be the same.

You were my first love, a love so strong and true.
You were always in my thoughts, I was so much in love with you.
These feelings were real, just wanted to be at your side,
Together always, just you and I.

Then one sad day came, you went away.
I was so sad but you wrote me every day.
But as time went by our love faded and was gone,
Now I write this as our rememberance love song.

You were my first love, your memory will always be there.
You can count on knowing that I'll always care.
Because there's a spot in my heart reserved just for you,
A little love remains there whenever I think of you.

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Rememberance Love Song

Contributed by mysticpoet on Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 08:01:37 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

I fell in love with you when we were seventeen.
What the future held for us was still left to be seen.
Throughout the years close friends we became,
Seemed our wants and our needs would always be the same.

You were my first love, a love so strong and true.
You were always in my thoughts, I was so much in love with you.
These feelings were real, just wanted to be at your side,
Together always, just you and I.

Then one sad day came, you went away.
I was so sad but you wrote me every day.
But as time went by our love faded and was gone,
Now I write this as our rememberance love song.

You were my first love, your memory will always be there.
You can count on knowing that I'll always care.
Because there's a spot in my heart reserved just for you,
A little love remains there whenever I think of you.

Copyright © mysticpoet ... [ 2004-11-03 20:01:37]
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Re: Rememberance Love Song (User Rating: 1 )
by humboldthunny17 on Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 08:04:07 PM AEST
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THis is a very good write.

Re: Rememberance Love Song (User Rating: 1 )
by humboldthunny17 on Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 08:04:45 PM AEST
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This is a nice poem because I can relate to what you wrote

Re: Rememberance Love Song (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 08:59:05 PM AEST
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Lovely write...brought back great memories for me of my first love...who will be my last love...... (I didn't say he was my only love...lol)
Jenni

Re: Rememberance Love Song (User Rating: 1 )
by TedHuggableBare on Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 09:37:40 PM AEST
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I know this all too well. Memories are so bitter-sweet when it comes to true love no matter if it's the first one or not. Loved the poem.

Re: Rememberance Love Song (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 05:39:17 AM AEST
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i remember my first love, I thought that when we split up I would die, I felt like I was for 18months afterwards, then we got back together and something had gone from the relationship and we didnt last second time round, but now I am in love and it much more special this time, as I am now quite abit older and can really appreciate love and what it means,a lovely write, its good to delve into our good memories now and again, thanks for sharing,

takecare,
pixie xx

Re: Rememberance Love Song (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 09:48:01 AM AEST
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i really believe in life you have to have loved and lost, to appreciate your existance, this is an exceptional write well done.

wildejohnny.

Re: Rememberance Love Song (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 11:13:37 AM AEST
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Yes I definitely remember my first love because the crush was very long before I was noticed!

The whole feel of your poem makes a person nostalgic, light, happy. All good.

Kie

Re: Rememberance Love Song (User Rating: 1 )
by mysticpoet on Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 11:42:31 AM AEST
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It's good isn't it to remember your first love? Actually this special person is still, to this day,
a good friend, even though we are both married to different people with our own families.

Re: Rememberance Love Song (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 04:11:18 AM AEST
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Very beautifull write here.
I think I saw luv once but I'm still waiting for my first luv, smiles, probably wouldn't recognize it tho or jus maybe he's serarching for me.
Heck u done got us all dreaming.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy

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