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The sun sinks low
And the day comes to an end
After 7 long and lonely days
This dreadful week perishes again
The end of the month comes after 4 lonely weeks
The end of the year chases 12 wicked months
My favorite song plays 120 times over in my head
That car ride with my friends
Is crazy cause I know its gonna end
This day is ending
It's all getting dark
And when the sun comes up
I know the night passed on by
I know my life is hell
It's all because of the ends
There is only one good end in life
And that's the
DEATH OF ME

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The End

Contributed by skyblumoon on Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 09:53:07 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

"THE END"
The sun sinks low
And the day comes to an end
After 7 long and lonely days
This dreadful week perishes again
The end of the month comes after 4 lonely weeks
The end of the year chases 12 wicked months
My favorite song plays 120 times over in my head
That car ride with my friends
Is crazy cause I know its gonna end
This day is ending
It's all getting dark
And when the sun comes up
I know the night passed on by
I know my life is hell
It's all because of the ends
There is only one good end in life
And that's the
DEATH OF ME

Copyright © skyblumoon ... [ 2004-11-04 09:53:07]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: The End (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 09:54:42 AM AEST
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sorry you are feeling depressed an lonely, you are not alone *holds out hand* a very deep and pained write,

takecare,
pixie xx

Re: The End (User Rating: 1 )
by jenny21614 on Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 12:44:06 PM AEST
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aw. a very emotional write. ive felt the same way the last couple of weeks. if u wanna talk about it pm/im me (my aim sn is the same as my user name) hope u feel better soon! :)
xoxo-jen.

Re: The End (User Rating: 1 )
by kidpoet_213 on Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 01:06:39 PM AEST
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Blu... hey there...
Sorry that u're feeling this way... I know how it can be... I've been there... it's no fun... we all get depressed at times... it's okay... just keep writing and talking about it...
We're all here if u need to talk... don't hestitate to do so...
Good write by the way...
ur friend always...
~Donna~

Re: The End (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 08:01:52 AM AEST
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A very deep & painful write.... it is a very powerful poem. Great write!!!!!

Re: The End (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 09:59:50 PM AEST
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great write. with every end there is a beginning. sorry that i havent seen your poems lately. =] keep your chin up.

Re: The End (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 09:43:57 AM AEST
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Very deep and full of emotions.. Very powerful.

~ :: christina :: ~

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