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It's hard to let go the love we share

Comment survivre l'angoisse et la paine
It's tearing me apart not seing u again

Comment combattre tous ces coups de mer
How to be patient,how to learn to bear

Comment calmer mon ame en querelle
When vows disappeared,jaded it fell

Pourquoi la joie,le temps des fleurs,les sourirs..
Last for seconds then turn into tears

Pourqoui en un coup d'oeil on est tout pris
But it takes forever to set our hearts free

Pourquoi se croire dans un monde magnifique
Why are we borm to be so weak

Pourquoi pour l'amour on sacrifie tout
Why devoting when nothing is true

Est-ce-que les souvenirs sont tout ce qui restent
Should i be doomed by this grueling test

Est-ce-que rêver a jamais été un crime
Running from reality ,holding to a dream

Décue , désespérée,j'ai perdu la boussole
Please help me seeking my lost soul [comments] => 4 [counter] => 228 [topic] => 22 [informant] => gina [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

WHY AIMER!?

Contributed by gina on Tuesday, 19th November 2002 @ 07:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Comment oublier et jetter derrière
It's hard to let go the love we share

Comment survivre l'angoisse et la paine
It's tearing me apart not seing u again

Comment combattre tous ces coups de mer
How to be patient,how to learn to bear

Comment calmer mon ame en querelle
When vows disappeared,jaded it fell

Pourquoi la joie,le temps des fleurs,les sourirs..
Last for seconds then turn into tears

Pourqoui en un coup d'oeil on est tout pris
But it takes forever to set our hearts free

Pourquoi se croire dans un monde magnifique
Why are we borm to be so weak

Pourquoi pour l'amour on sacrifie tout
Why devoting when nothing is true

Est-ce-que les souvenirs sont tout ce qui restent
Should i be doomed by this grueling test

Est-ce-que rêver a jamais été un crime
Running from reality ,holding to a dream

Décue , désespérée,j'ai perdu la boussole
Please help me seeking my lost soul

Copyright Â© gina ... [ 2002-11-19 07:00:00]
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Re: WHY AIMER!? (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Tuesday, 19th November 2002 @ 07:06:26 AM AEST
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This is so beautiful and so
clever, i enjoyed this alot.
Very beautiful how you have
the language like that in the poem
Bravo! Thanks for sharing this one
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.

Re: WHY AIMER!? (User Rating: 1 )
by WordPoet on Tuesday, 19th November 2002 @ 07:59:33 AM AEST
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Though I'm fairly sure most people will not understand the french half of the poem, I think it was very well done the way you merged the two languages into a contrast of themes while still keeping the rythm and rhyme flowing.

Re: WHY AIMER!? (User Rating: 1 )
by Opium on Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 01:15:04 AM AEST
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C'est magnifique Gina, un extraordinaire mixage entre l'anglais et le français, I really liked it alot, probably the best poems I've read ;)

Re: WHY AIMER!? (User Rating: 1 )
by azzouz on Wednesday, 11th December 2002 @ 10:33:22 AM AEST
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awsome....this is the best poeme ever made...
true feelings...full of honesty.....
a unique way in merging two languages and keeping the rythm going on and on till the end...
bravo gina....

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