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thats how you made me feel
my heart just started to shrivle up
it all became so real

Take a needle to your mouth
and try to sew it up
for weeks i wouldent talk
your words just shut me up

pull a blade accross your wrist
and cringe at the blood you see
thats exactly how i cringed
at the thought of you and me

Throw a knife at someones heart
that you used to call your own
thats exactly how my heart felt
when those words came out the phone

put a rose inside some water
and watch it slowly wilt
thats exactly what im doing now
but yet , i love you STILL. [comments] => 9 [counter] => 165 [topic] => 48 [informant] => imalive_enoughsaid [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Emotions

Contributed by imalive_enoughsaid on Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 05:11:56 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Pour some salt inside a cut
thats how you made me feel
my heart just started to shrivle up
it all became so real

Take a needle to your mouth
and try to sew it up
for weeks i wouldent talk
your words just shut me up

pull a blade accross your wrist
and cringe at the blood you see
thats exactly how i cringed
at the thought of you and me

Throw a knife at someones heart
that you used to call your own
thats exactly how my heart felt
when those words came out the phone

put a rose inside some water
and watch it slowly wilt
thats exactly what im doing now
but yet , i love you STILL.

Copyright © imalive_enoughsaid ... [ 2004-11-04 17:11:56]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Emotions (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 05:13:00 PM AEST
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ouch, love really does hurt in this write, well expressed emotional poem,

takecare,
pixie xx

Re: Emotions (User Rating: 1 )
by MickeyPigKnuckles on Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 05:15:33 PM AEST
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Very powerful and love is the most important part of life. Once again, another master piece from a very talented poet loaded with strong emotion. I can only hope that a little of you rubs off onto me as you are such an inspiration. Your Dear Friend MickeyPigKnuckles :o)

Re: Emotions (User Rating: 1 )
by gherkin on Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 05:19:58 PM AEST
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we've all been there and it hurts
- perfectly described with well chosen words
be brave
xx

Re: Emotions (User Rating: 1 )
by taryn on Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 05:29:50 PM AEST
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this is a beautiful write with good words.

Re: Emotions (User Rating: 1 )
by theMoth on Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 05:43:27 PM AEST
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Alot of hurt in this poem.
Good write.
--Mothy

Re: Emotions (User Rating: 1 )
by Spike on Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 05:12:00 AM AEST
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A powerful read. Loved the metaphors - confronting yet perfectly conveying the pain wrought by heartless words and acts. If this doesn't draw forth his empathy, nothing will!

Spike

Re: Emotions (User Rating: 1 )
by DesperateSoul on Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 06:56:32 PM AEST
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Excellent JOb!!!!!!!!! Keep Posting,and writing always!!! ~*Dana~*

Re: Emotions (User Rating: 1 )
by Errious on Thursday, 7th December 2006 @ 03:20:12 PM AEST
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wow! the repetition works excellently! I thought that was amazing! It not very often that you see a poem with that kind of imagery and feeling in it as that one. And the last stanza is a fantastic concluding verse and contasts the whole poem fantastically. Well done!

Tom

Re: Emotions (User Rating: 1 )
by NDean on Thursday, 7th December 2006 @ 03:24:03 PM AEST
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A well written poem that flows excellently
Well done
:D

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