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hours spent crying tears
with no one but insanity to hear me.
Blood flows from my
battered wrists,
leaving a trail of
dank decay.
Scream and scream
just to escape the horrid sound
of my pewter heart
breaking with every beat.
Nothing can save me from
this desolate land of sorrow,
for I cannot save myself. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 163 [topic] => 61 [informant] => WorthlesSanity666 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

Land of Emptiness Within Me

Contributed by WorthlesSanity666 on Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 06:24:48 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

I get lost in my hollowness,
hours spent crying tears
with no one but insanity to hear me.
Blood flows from my
battered wrists,
leaving a trail of
dank decay.
Scream and scream
just to escape the horrid sound
of my pewter heart
breaking with every beat.
Nothing can save me from
this desolate land of sorrow,
for I cannot save myself.

Copyright © WorthlesSanity666 ... [ 2004-11-04 18:24:48]
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Re: Land of Emptiness Within Me (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 06:35:58 PM AEST
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This write is horifically sad but written well.
Call ambulence and get some help. Please?
Some times we jus can't do it alone. There are many great medications out there that can bring u some peace from your trials. You would absolutly b surprized at the many folks that rely on meds for some peace of mind.
I take zzooloft which is a miracle pill for me.
Please get help cause life can be worth living. I battled with depression all my lift then bout six years ago a wise Dr. finnally found the right meds for me.
luv, huggs, prayer, hope,
emy

Re: Land of Emptiness Within Me (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 08:27:32 PM AEST
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A solid write..I did very well here.

Re: Land of Emptiness Within Me (User Rating: 1 )
by smiley_jennyxoxo on Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 11:07:19 AM AEST
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That poem is so sad :'( I've felt that way before. I've thought about suicide before, but you should think about all the people who care about you also, and how they'd react if they find you committed suicide... I doubt any of your friends would like that. Talk to a friend about your feelings, usually they can help... if not, i'll be here for you. Email me if you want. Jenny

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