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Array ( [sid] => 70178 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Knock Me Out [time] => 2004-11-04 19:18:46 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I have bled so much, I am just giving up
Crying out in pain, Screaming with sorrow
Locked in this prison, Stuck in Solitary
Eyes blank, Heart black
Take my soul away, Im already lifeless

My pain thickens each time I blink
Cant take the pain, Knock me out
Stones in my stomach rattling around
Infection spreading, Raging throughout
Cant take the pain

Just do it already
Knock me senseless, Knock me lifeless
Do it already! Knock me the ***** out
Tears rushing down, Pain growing stronger
Growing impatient, blades not working

Nothing has worked, just makes it worse
KNOCK ME OUT
I've tooken much more pain
Emotionally and Phsycally.
Why the ***** do you think Im like this

Its because of you why I am
So just do me a favor
End my pain, Knock me out
Cure my Tragedy. End my pain
Stop my Suffering

Knock me out.....
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 166 [topic] => 36 [informant] => xRotten_Insidex [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
Knock Me Out

Contributed by xRotten_Insidex on Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 07:18:46 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



I have bled so much, I am just giving up
Crying out in pain, Screaming with sorrow
Locked in this prison, Stuck in Solitary
Eyes blank, Heart black
Take my soul away, Im already lifeless

My pain thickens each time I blink
Cant take the pain, Knock me out
Stones in my stomach rattling around
Infection spreading, Raging throughout
Cant take the pain

Just do it already
Knock me senseless, Knock me lifeless
Do it already! Knock me the ***** out
Tears rushing down, Pain growing stronger
Growing impatient, blades not working

Nothing has worked, just makes it worse
KNOCK ME OUT
I've tooken much more pain
Emotionally and Phsycally.
Why the ***** do you think Im like this

Its because of you why I am
So just do me a favor
End my pain, Knock me out
Cure my Tragedy. End my pain
Stop my Suffering

Knock me out.....




Copyright © xRotten_Insidex ... [ 2004-11-04 19:18:46]
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Re: Knock Me Out (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 07:29:04 PM AEST
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wow I like it... It has so much Emotions so much anger lol Well Chic stay Strong and don't let stuff get to you okay


Re: Knock Me Out (User Rating: 1 )
by Ceres on Sunday, 5th August 2007 @ 07:05:16 AM AEST
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i like... raw but very very good =)
much love ~ ceres




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