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Array ( [sid] => 70209 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Only A Dream [time] => 2004-11-04 22:13:14 [hometext] => This was an experimental piece.. on a dream i had i dont usually write in this way so please tell me what you think! [bodytext] => It's dark outside as i settle in my bed,
running throught the day in my mind,
my eyes become heavy and i start to drift away,
to a land where anything is possible,
i find myself surrounded by horses,
beside a shimmering moonlite lake,
but as i look around i see things are contorted,
and not as "perfect" as things first seemed,
i see a leper before me with tears in his eyes,
and woman knelt over a man,
slowly approaching i hear sighs and goodbyes,
as it appears somebody has lost thier life's love,
the woman spins round and starts screaming at me violently,
"are you happy to see what you've done",
as i look down im startled to see what in my hand,
but a knife and my skirt covered in blood,
startled as i am i raise the knife up to my heart
and then suddenly and surely i realise this is,
Only a dream [comments] => 7 [counter] => 190 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Midian [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 22 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
Only A Dream

Contributed by Midian on Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 10:13:14 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



It's dark outside as i settle in my bed,
running throught the day in my mind,
my eyes become heavy and i start to drift away,
to a land where anything is possible,
i find myself surrounded by horses,
beside a shimmering moonlite lake,
but as i look around i see things are contorted,
and not as "perfect" as things first seemed,
i see a leper before me with tears in his eyes,
and woman knelt over a man,
slowly approaching i hear sighs and goodbyes,
as it appears somebody has lost thier life's love,
the woman spins round and starts screaming at me violently,
"are you happy to see what you've done",
as i look down im startled to see what in my hand,
but a knife and my skirt covered in blood,
startled as i am i raise the knife up to my heart
and then suddenly and surely i realise this is,
Only a dream




Copyright © Midian ... [ 2004-11-04 22:13:14]
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Re: Only A Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 10:20:05 PM AEST
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very cool little pice


Re: Only A Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 10:29:29 PM AEST
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good write. dreams are always entertaining until theyre those censored reoccuring nightmares.


Re: Only A Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 10:59:03 PM AEST
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this is a great write for an idea from a dream i liked it alot

Peace and hope
*JENNA*


Re: Only A Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 12:53:26 AM AEST
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More like a nite mare to me.
Great writing.
I'm happy it was only a dream.
good work.
luv, huggs, happy u alive,
emy


Re: Only A Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by girish on Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 05:39:55 AM AEST
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dear friend,

a nice expression it seemed
feelings suppressed have been redeemed

a story like piece very good

girish


Re: Only A Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 06:19:04 AM AEST
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very good write,

takecare,
pixie xx


Re: Only A Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 06:33:56 AM AEST
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Freaky write, visual and intense, graphic and chilly, had me on the edge of my seat, way cool poem, loved it greatly, cheers for sharing such a masterful pice of talent.




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