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Array ( [sid] => 70224 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => For Sale [time] => 2004-11-05 01:05:17 [hometext] => I wrote this at dinner tonight ... Sometimes I have no idea what is gonna fall out of my mind [bodytext] => I met a man down on the corner
Dealing in stolen souls
I asked him where they came from
He said "It's best if you don't know"
When I asked him what my soul was worth
Well, his eyes turned dark and cold
He said
" Its the one thing you take with you
When you go"

I saw a monkey dealin' freedom
In the middle of the road
He was chained to an organ grinder
Talkin to a man with nowhere to go
The man signed all the papers
The monkey put on a show
When the music stopped
The monkey was gone
The man now carried his load

Don't buy what you can't own
Don't own what you can't sell
A lesson learned too late
Will be a lesson learned too well
Listen to these words my friend
Pay attention to this tale
For there are some things in this world
That just shouldn't be for sale


Give me back my money
I don't want this life no more
I bought it from a salesman
Who come a knockin' on my door
He said it won't be sold on TV
I wouldn't find it in any store
He poured all my dreams
Into a jar
And smashed it on the floor

Don't buy what you can't own
Don't own what you can't sell
A lesson learned too late
Will be a lesson learned too well
Listen to these words my friend
Pay attention to this tale
For there are some things in this world
That just shouldn't be for sale

Yeah
There are some things in this world we live
That shouldn't be ~

For sale
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For Sale

Contributed by Nazmythian on Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 01:05:17 AM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics



I met a man down on the corner
Dealing in stolen souls
I asked him where they came from
He said "It's best if you don't know"
When I asked him what my soul was worth
Well, his eyes turned dark and cold
He said
" Its the one thing you take with you
When you go"

I saw a monkey dealin' freedom
In the middle of the road
He was chained to an organ grinder
Talkin to a man with nowhere to go
The man signed all the papers
The monkey put on a show
When the music stopped
The monkey was gone
The man now carried his load

Don't buy what you can't own
Don't own what you can't sell
A lesson learned too late
Will be a lesson learned too well
Listen to these words my friend
Pay attention to this tale
For there are some things in this world
That just shouldn't be for sale


Give me back my money
I don't want this life no more
I bought it from a salesman
Who come a knockin' on my door
He said it won't be sold on TV
I wouldn't find it in any store
He poured all my dreams
Into a jar
And smashed it on the floor

Don't buy what you can't own
Don't own what you can't sell
A lesson learned too late
Will be a lesson learned too well
Listen to these words my friend
Pay attention to this tale
For there are some things in this world
That just shouldn't be for sale

Yeah
There are some things in this world we live
That shouldn't be ~

For sale




Copyright © Nazmythian ... [ 2004-11-05 01:05:17]
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Re: For Sale (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 01:14:00 AM AEST
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Very unique, incredible write.
luv, huggs,
emy


Re: For Sale (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 02:02:01 AM AEST
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awesome, this is great!!!! wow, i love it, best ive read in ages!!!


Re: For Sale (User Rating: 1 )
by a_bear on Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 02:18:27 AM AEST
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I want a monkey


Re: For Sale (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 02:46:01 AM AEST
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Bravo! This was a good one. Excellent language, it got your point across well. Keep up this fine stuff.

Andrew


Re: For Sale (User Rating: 1 )
by bernard on Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 03:01:56 AM AEST
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Naz another great write very philosophical and also very true. Full marks as always from bernard.


Re: For Sale (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 05:55:22 AM AEST
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An awesome and beautiful write, flowing with rythem, vividly clear images, and mysterious storylines and plots, intrigue and unequiness.
Cool song loved it, thanks so much for the privalage of reading such art, form an awesome talented mind.


Re: For Sale (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 06:02:49 AM AEST
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wow, this is nothing short of amazing,

takecare,
pixie xx


Re: For Sale (User Rating: 1 )
by FleurdeSang on Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 02:32:18 PM AEST
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Wonderful! I love the imagery and flow of this piece! all in all perfect!! As always, lol. I love the moral of this story. Excellent. Haha, yeah, you never know what your hands will create. That's the beauty of this poem, so spontaneous, so different in its totality... Love it! I hope there'll be some more like these!! Incredible! Thank you so much for sharing this! Much love, and be back Sunday! XOXO! Forever,

Fleur de bonheur!


Re: For Sale (User Rating: 1 )
by theMoth on Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 04:34:19 PM AEST
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Cool stuff!

--Mothy


Re: For Sale (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 05:03:32 AM AEST
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Wow awesome that was excellent loved it.

Love Sweetangelukxxxx


Re: For Sale (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 05:14:10 AM AEST
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Wow that was a fantastic write, very original and fresh makes me wanna read it over and over again. This is so good.

Hugs,
Jane x


Re: For Sale (User Rating: 1 )
by Willofree on Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 05:21:10 PM AEST
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Naz,

Very creative piece. What a wonderful imagative mind you have. Also, there appears to be an important message regarding certain things that shouldn't be for sale.

I think those spontaneous creative writes are the best

Keep them coming
Willofree


Re: For Sale (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 10:32:07 AM AEST
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holy sh!t nazzy...
this was amazing man.
imagery was great, nice flow. this is a great piece of work. wonderfully done.
loved this. 5 stars
Becky


Re: For Sale (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 05:39:12 PM AEST
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Such a wise message packaged in perfect poetic form. A masterpiece my friend...

Barkeep!
Larry


Re: For Sale (User Rating: 1 )
by eyesxcriedxout1989 on Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 07:57:02 PM AEST
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This was a really awesome piece...It reminded me of Devil Went Down To Georgia, by The Charlie Daniels Band lol It was very good though

Mason


Re: For Sale (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 01:10:22 AM AEST
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i can see this being used for a rock or a bluesy number or a bluesyrock number even!
this is an excellent piece Naz well done.

Johnny.


Re: For Sale (User Rating: 1 )
by critterhideaway on Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 08:03:06 PM AEST
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How very true and well presented!!!, Thanks for posting this!!


Re: For Sale (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 08:03:22 PM AEST
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very well written, flowing excellent message, tune and verse:) hugs n' love nessa

@->>->:-


Re: For Sale (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 08:42:00 PM AEST
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Fabulous Nazzy!

Gosh - I have so many questions... what were you eating? were you dining alone? were you home or at a restaurant? (LOL --- yeh.... I'm digging, trying to find that well of inspiration that you tumbled into!)

Clearly, this is a piece that asked you to write. I, for one, am glad you did. And... you did it well, Nazzy -- boy, yeh, you really did!

Loving everything about this - from imagery to flow, from structure to message... everything.
~ SNM


Re: For Sale (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 12:59:13 PM AEST
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You remind me a bit of Bill Mallonnee...

They were makin available the dreams of the past
for a limited time while the supply lasts
I got in line and I gave the man my cash

Yeah, buyin' fake diamonds
buyin' fools' gold
and I keep em in a sack
shot full o' holes

Something like that.
Good stuff.
Very full write.
Stitch




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