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Array ( [sid] => 7038 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Where were you? [time] => 2002-11-19 20:30:00 [hometext] => This is a poem I wrote today in school and it's the first poem I've submitted. Any comments are gladly accepted [bodytext] => I cried out for you,
but you weren't even there.
Holding someone else's hand.
life had to be so unfair.

I held on to you in my heart,
while you pushed away.
We never even touched,
So there was nothing to say.

I saw you for who you were,
but you had to get so mean.
You didn't even give me a chance.
You left me there unseen.

You say we're best friends.
Now I see everything's untrue
When I needed you most,
Where were you? [comments] => 6 [counter] => 211 [topic] => 43 [informant] => ceazer2005 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Where were you?

Contributed by ceazer2005 on Tuesday, 19th November 2002 @ 08:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

I cried out for you,
but you weren't even there.
Holding someone else's hand.
life had to be so unfair.

I held on to you in my heart,
while you pushed away.
We never even touched,
So there was nothing to say.

I saw you for who you were,
but you had to get so mean.
You didn't even give me a chance.
You left me there unseen.

You say we're best friends.
Now I see everything's untrue
When I needed you most,
Where were you?

Copyright Â© ceazer2005 ... [ 2002-11-19 20:30:00]
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Re: Where were you? (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Tuesday, 19th November 2002 @ 09:23:16 PM AEST
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This happens all to often and it's so
sad, this is exactly why i dont allow myself
to get close to anyone enough that i can
or could call them my best friend because
of this situation right here. It's a painful
one to, Thanks for sharing this one it
reminded me why i'm like i am...and why
i do some of the things i do and have done
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.

Re: Where were you? (User Rating: 1 )
by aernby on Tuesday, 19th November 2002 @ 10:00:26 PM AEST
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this is a good write, rhymes are good, lines scan well [you might want to re-consider line 4]. good job!!!!

Re: Where were you? (User Rating: 1 )
by GEQUETSCHT on Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 08:32:30 AM AEST
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It seems that i know this one all too much.. But seriously, for your first poem, as you say, it IS really good, and i think that you have alot more potential comming (lol if that sounded bad i didnt mean it to, im just really bad with words, or at least putting how i feel in the the right way, lost yet?) hope to see more of your work around.

Ali

Re: Where were you? (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 12:10:36 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC...
This is so sad, but so well written.. Been there, done that!! Hope to see more of your work here..
Jenni

Re: Where were you? (User Rating: 1 )
by LayDownPlayDead on Monday, 2nd December 2002 @ 09:43:27 PM AEST
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Wow, I really liked that one alot. It's so true and it happens all the time. Good one!

Re: Where were you? (User Rating: 1 )
by Crazy4Christ on Monday, 2nd December 2002 @ 10:37:35 PM AEST
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Wow...awesome write...Its so true!!

~ash~

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