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New constellations are mapped

One them is of you and I

Holding hands looking at the sky

These stars can be seen even by daylight

There is no explanation why

Maybe the sun wants to see them too

This sight we cannot deprive any one of

You can’t deprive me of your love

We have been through to much for me

Not to have you now like I want you

I want you more than anything

Not just in my bed but in my life and day dreams

You mean more to me than that

Stellar views in your eyes

New galaxies revealed

To me a new place for me to take you

Another thing that just makes you more special

That brings you close to what you want to be

To what I already see in you but you do not

That you are beautiful and envelope me

Like those stellar views in you eyes
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Stellar Views In Your Eyes

Contributed by Doriens_Picture on Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 11:14:04 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Stellar views in your eyes

New constellations are mapped

One them is of you and I

Holding hands looking at the sky

These stars can be seen even by daylight

There is no explanation why

Maybe the sun wants to see them too

This sight we cannot deprive any one of

You can’t deprive me of your love

We have been through to much for me

Not to have you now like I want you

I want you more than anything

Not just in my bed but in my life and day dreams

You mean more to me than that

Stellar views in your eyes

New galaxies revealed

To me a new place for me to take you

Another thing that just makes you more special

That brings you close to what you want to be

To what I already see in you but you do not

That you are beautiful and envelope me

Like those stellar views in you eyes

Copyright Â© Doriens_Picture ... [ 2004-11-06 23:14:04]
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Re: Stellar Views In Your Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 11:50:11 PM AEST
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Shazzzaamm! Don't know who u r trying to swoon but ya jus knocked me of f my zone and zapped me into paridise!!!
Mercy lawd dat one dare he's on fire!
Like i said I'm spaced out here with this masterpeice guareenteed to send one to outer space.
Wat planet did u say u live on?
Bedazzled-n-speechless,
emy

Re: Stellar Views In Your Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 12:13:20 AM AEST
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WOW arent you a romantic lol. This is so written carefully with so much detail. i love it

Hugs,
Jane x

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